|Reviews for A World of Pain|
| Ella chapter 6 . 12/16/2012
You're story is great- so I'll have no issue waiting for you to update! In the future, I suggest you proofread your writing, or have a beta to work out the grammatical errors in your story. Otherwise, I like the story and wish you the best on working things out in your personal life. :)
| BlueEyedKlutz chapter 6 . 7/29/2012
I LOVE this story so far :) can't wait for the next Chapter!
| catherinedoncaster1995 chapter 5 . 5/12/2011
This was cool. Update xx
| Tanya Misspink chapter 5 . 4/6/2011
i love ur story bt y rnt u updating?
| Tanya Misspink chapter 5 . 4/1/2011
y arnt u updating\?
| Tanya Misspink chapter 5 . 3/29/2011
just update alredy/its friggin gud...
| T-EdWaRd4LiFe chapter 5 . 11/28/2010
iluv ur story hopefully u update it soon
| bookworm913 chapter 5 . 9/10/2010
i love it
| Ibet Macias chapter 5 . 7/16/2010
Graet story cant wait 2c how it ends plese update
| Black Eyed Hawk chapter 5 . 7/3/2010
OMG I cant believe u nearly killed Edward off. Please update
| xXxhurting-insidexXx chapter 5 . 7/2/2010
AHHHHHH That Was Ahhhmazing!
| mizzymaiz chapter 5 . 7/1/2010
uh oh whats wrong with Edward now? I like this story, i just sometimes don't understand your words, like 'foirst' whats that! somebody tell me!
Oh yeah, and please check how you spell some words cause some aren't spelt properly :) some chapters are a bit rushed.
All in all, a great story :D
| Ivet macias chapter 4 . 5/21/2010
Omj this is sooo interesting I kind of like how you put so much drama it rele makes me wonder wat will happen next
oh and plese don't let anything happened to edward
| xXxhurting-insidexXx chapter 4 . 5/21/2010
| SimplyKatieKate chapter 4 . 5/21/2010
love it. please continue. amazing story