|Reviews for The volturi returns|
| evfangirl98 chapter 8 . 5/27/2010
| vampire.ditto.19 chapter 8 . 5/13/2010
jacob should get over it if skylar wants to play he should let her i mean she has to have something to do and nobody will tell her whats going on so he should try in relax
| Fluffy Green Thing chapter 8 . 5/13/2010
aww cute but please continue and i dont think little babies like sky know words like CRAP!
| BbyGurlNanii chapter 7 . 5/6/2010
Kool story write more
| vampire.ditto.19 chapter 6 . 5/5/2010
holy lord im so sorry well i hope its not broke and when ur better still update i like this story
| imaginationsparker chapter 5 . 4/30/2010
This keeps me reading and wanting more. You should be a writer when you get older. This has the same twists as an adult would write. You are a fanomonal writer. Keep up the good work!
| evfangirl98 chapter 5 . 4/29/2010
| vampire.ditto.19 chapter 5 . 4/29/2010
why did you stop now i gotta wait man it was just gettin good ugh hope to see more love it
| RupertHadAReallyCloseCall chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
A great story. Very well written.
| wiwiky chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
"Jacob and Renesmee have a half vamp, half human, and half werewolf daughter..."
Is Renesmee and Jacob's daughter 1 and a half person? Fix it. She would be a third vamp, a third werewolf, and a third human. Also, why apologize for "cliffies"? That's the whole point, to hold the reader to the story until you continue it. If you can/must, end every chapter on a cliffhanger.