Reviews for Twist of Fate
SasuNaru's Loyal Fangirl TDDUP chapter 10 . 3/18
you shouldn't have revealed this too early. It's best we haven't even known about much of the time traveling. Bombarded with a lot of information, we can be confused, and will mostly lose some of our intrigue. You have a good plot. It was not organized nor executed well, but still quite enjoyable. You mostly tell us what happened, the story should be a balance of show and tell, it gets boring otherwise. At least for me.
SasuNaru's Loyal Fangirl TDDUP chapter 9 . 3/18
I think when tom went to Hogwarts he's 12. if he's bday is 1926, and he went in 1938, maybe it's because of his birthday. I don't know why a lot of fanfiction always mistakes him as 11 years old, I mean the numbers show otherwise and despite how special and unique tom is, I don't think he can be an exception to birth years.
dawnraptor chapter 67 . 2/27
More than 2.5 million words and not a story finished! This is very, very sad.
objectivepersona chapter 7 . 2/23
I can actually see where Cormac is coming from. Albus was personally involved with a man killing thousands and he is coming to him as if he was a third party and a concerned citizen. if Albus truly desired change he should have given some secrets away. secrets are for the department of mysteries to handle anyway, they probably already have secrets that could screw the world ten ways to Sunday, what is one more? t
zantsu chapter 67 . 1/24
I hope you will finish the story...
I'm wondering, will Harry be brought to the Dark Lord? The Phoenix must have apparated him right into the spot, where dead Julian was laying. Will Gellert be near still? ...
Guest chapter 67 . 1/5
Please update! This is the most well written fanfic I've read.
EmLights chapter 67 . 11/28/2017
I really wish you would come back and complete this story. It is amazing!
hauchsava chapter 67 . 11/17/2017
that was very beautiful fanfic thank you i spent days reading it and had a blast very well written and i love being able to see from different points of view from different people and i am very intrigued with future events and fates of Santi and Jullian, i know you didnt update in a while but i really hope you will come back to this amazing story its a piece of art :)
GalaxInfinity chapter 1 . 10/28/2017
It is one of the most elaborate and magnificent stories I have ever read. How everything is interwoven with each other. If it were not for the part that it is a Fanfic, you could publish it as a novel. I feel yes it is not well written, English is not my thing. P.S. Is it still true? Because the gas left when the plot begins to unravel and everything starts to clear up and you can not leave it like thisit is too well crafted and written not to end it.
777MAR777 chapter 8 . 10/7/2017
I've read many fanfictions, but I don't think I've ever read one where Harry is so frustratingly naive and childish. My seven year old cousin acts twice more maturely than your Harry. I believe you truly have no idea how eleven year olds act.
777MAR777 chapter 4 . 10/7/2017
Your Harry is more gullible, innocent, stupid and weak than canon Harry... How you managed to accomplish that with him being raised with Tom Riddle is a fucking mystery to me. I hope he grows up fast, because this is getting annoying.
AdaDiya chapter 67 . 9/11/2017
I love your story. Phenomenal writing!
LiquidThought chapter 67 . 7/28/2017
Oh, this was so... brilliant, raw and spot on. Thank you very much for writing and sharing. I love the way you develop your original characters; give them just enough space for us to understand and care. I also love the dynamics you created for Harry's and Tom's relationship; Harry slowly learning how to pick his battles and stop at nothing to win those that truly count, Tom being so wonderfully and horribly Tom... I really hope that you don't plan to pair these two together romantically - I simply can't see that happening since your Harry knows better than give Tom that kind of power over him. Meaning you can count me in the fan girl faction rooting for Harry/Santi. Although I could probably enjoy a Harry/Alphie teenage blunder in the meanwhile as well, come to think of it. However, what I would most enjoy, in any case, is a brand new, fresh and juicy chapter :) Anything like that coming our way anytime soon, you think?
Fathinahih chapter 67 . 7/21/2017
Pleaseee come backk, and continue the storyy...
SethisawesomeGT chapter 10 . 7/18/2017
this was too... confusing
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