This has an excellent premise, can't wait to see where it goes!

hi1!

is great ur new fic, but i dont really understand the whole chapter i expect new ones coming son so congrats!

I really liked this chapter. I think baby Tom is so damn cute. He is so like who the hell are you and why are you in my crib. I think you have a great idea for this story and I cant wait to see how it will play out. I hope you keep writing like this. I also hope you show some of them growing up together. I also hope that you update on a regular basses. Please keep up the great job that you have started. I will be looking forward to reading more!

Very nice start :) I look forward to the next chapter and I'm really glad you that you've decided to include time-traveling. I wonder only when Tom and Harry grow up and they develop feelings for each other, will they feel conflicted about it or will they embrace it instead? Well, I'm quite curious where you will take this story since you do have an original plot just like in the Black Heir and Vindico Atrum. Only one question, will you upload your Death Note fic someday? I really hope you will do it sometime in the future and not abandon it, perhaps continue with it after the Vindico Atrum is finished?

But I really enjoyed this chapter and it will be exciting to see if this one will eventually develop into a simpler plot than your other Harry Potter fics did or if it will become a more complex one like the Vindico ;)

confusing a bit but it is real good plot too

This is soo great, an interesting twist, very exciting. Please uopdate soon!

Kind of confusing and a bit boring. No clear picture emerging. Things are hazy and the pace of the story is sluggish.

Hope you clear things up soon sometime soon.

Here's to you continuing this story and making it blossom. :o

I like it, the idea is different then what i've usually read, which is cool. I am curious is it a slash? or is a brotherfic? (please say slash, pretty please) can't wait for the next chapter!

great start

Wow, very promising. And, given that this is the first chapter, quite confusing. :D

Waiting for more, uptade soon! :**

Wonderful beginning..time travel, Harry being raised with Tom as his brother and the Malfoy's entwined with the changes. Lucius as a lizard Animigus is a good fit...love it. I'm looking forward to seeing Harry and Tom grow up together and the strength they have between them.

Very interesting start. Please update soon

Excellent start.

A new fic! Just hearing from you makes me giddy.

I can understand if you want a break from vindico and as a fan I wholeheartedly give you my support. Somehow your writing style for this story is different from the black heir and vindico (much easier to read) because there isn't a bombardment of details.

The plot is interesting without being cliche. thank you so much for touching timetravel/AU. You are one of the masters when it comes to HArry/Voldie or Harry/Tom.

praying for your speedy update on this one

AMAZING! I hope you continue this as you have Orion's story, this sounds so interesting, I love it already and it's only chapter one!