Reviews for Under the Umbrella
Zero Unit RGB chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
I like it. Nicely done on your part, these two are good pairings and much more realistic than other stories.
Nietzsche's Itch chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
"Minami nodded. "Guilmon is the only real man in our group."

That was my favourite line, though overall it was stylish and cute. Well done :)
Circeus chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Oh man, Thursday and Friday had me totally CRACKED UP. I'm not entirely sure about the conclusion though. I mean, it's funny, but kinda... conventional? Doesn't seem to fit any girls I know anyway, and those two don't strike me as particularly forgetful.
ARCtheElite chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Interesting.

Slightly unsettling too. I'm not sure whether I'm impressed by the insight you seem to have for females (though you could be off by a mile; I wouldn't know), or disturbed that you painted girls this way. It's also completely unlike your regular writing style; did someone else write this?

With nothing else to say, I'll end off with one of these:

O_O
Aster Selene chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Girls and love lives - looks like you've gotten us figured out...sigh, we'll have to try harder.

But every time I see the name Minami I think of Lucky Star's Iwasaki Minami...I need to watch the Tamers movie again and drill the idea back into my head...