|Reviews for A Pound of Flesh|
| luckycullen chapter 34 . 10/12/2013
I have no words to express the emotions for this chapter... The sex was out of this world, and their first declarations of love, just perfect. Cullen's journal was like the cherry of the cake and his final speech... took my breath away!
| cfigueroa78 chapter 36 . 10/11/2013
I'm so enthrall end by this story ... Such a great plot and the way you give all the characters such depth is amazing. Most stories focus on one or two main characters and everyone else is just in the background but here, everyone's role is important and we get an in depth view of who they are. This is great because everyone in this story plays a huge part in the overall story - it is a great love story between Bella and Edward but we get a deeper look into their worlds and the people that make that up. This is one of the best stories I have read on FF.
| luckycullen chapter 33 . 10/11/2013
Wow, the house is just awesome... and the fluff, romance and smut, everything is perfect... Lucky Bella!
| cfigueroa78 chapter 32 . 10/11/2013
She's sacrificed a lot for him and always had faith in him. It's sad that he doesn't really see that and what that means. Her love for him is right in front of his face and he hides behind cruelty and selfishness. I love them together and understand the shit he went through but he needs to start doing things to prove he deserves her because right now, he doesn't deserve her at all.
| luckycullen chapter 32 . 10/11/2013
What an emotional roller coaster chapter... You are so good at writing the dialogs and I'm convinced they are meant to be lovers!
| cfigueroa78 chapter 28 . 10/10/2013
Okay, his reaction was SO unfair ... She kissed Peter yes. He was in jail and at each other's throats. Did he forget the blowjob when he got out?! And the groping he got from a girl the SAME day he kissed her?! Dick. PAW is sexy but the double standard shit just doesn't fly.
| cfigueroa78 chapter 27 . 10/10/2013
I liked that Edward messed with Peter at the end there. Jasper and Alice are on my shit list, along with Peter and Renee. But I have an awful feeling that even though it was good to throw his relationship with Bella in his face, he also gave him ammo to push him out of the company. Threatening Bella's career is one way to achieve it ... Remembering what Garrett said about facing prosecution if an inappropriate relationship was found out between them. Bella is the only one really screwed here.
| cfigueroa78 chapter 24 . 10/10/2013
That's was a tough chapter - so emotionally charged. So bittersweet that he's holding her again sixteen later to the day because of the loss of her dad. He was there holding her and protecting her sixteen years ago that day and she's not even aware of it.
| luckycullen chapter 31 . 10/10/2013
Amazing chapter, I love everything in it, but I adored the six-two, bronze haired, tattooed vibrator! Wow!
| cfigueroa78 chapter 16 . 10/10/2013
It hurts when he's with someone other than his Peaches! I know, I know it's necessary and only realistic that the guy just got out of prison - he can't have his dream girl right away. Great, great story!
| DraBSwan chapter 38 . 10/10/2013
Hi, dear writer. Im currently reading yor story. In the past I loved to comment every chapter of an story, I think every one of them deserves a little thanks, but I dont have much time, so now I read and type a review at the end of the story. I have a 1 month old baby and she doensn let me much time for writing, but I had to stop here and tell you... GREAT CHAPTER EVER. I loved not only the plot but your writing, I write fanfiction too, and know it isnt easy to create a character like this and in a such moment of the story let him without defences... that scene in the shower made me remember when Fifty shades kneels in front of Bella (or Anastasia) like a submissive. A great congratulations for you and... OLÉ TU ARTE (more or less, Olé your art LOL) . So... Im Spanish ;). Greetings from Barcelona.
| luckycullen chapter 30 . 10/9/2013
Wow, Cullen was a sexy vamp, and Peaches a blonde hot cop! I'll repeat after you, it'll be okay...it'll be okay... it'll be okay!
| planetblue chapter 47 . 10/8/2013
My dear girl,
How do I put into words how much I loved your story? It's impossible.
The way you so finely tuned Edward into the character you did, with his flaws and insecurities, into a man not
afraid to love his Peaches and accept love in return.
Their story was so beautiful, and I love that you never really made their obstacles THEM. You never had them separate for weeks or any of that nonsense, but the roadblocks they encountered was everyone else and their situation. Completely refreshing.
Now, to mention the hotness. Oh My Lord Girl. You know how to smoke us with your hot lemons! Phew! From his badassness to the boxing to the tatts to the smoking to the oreos to the beach house to the motorcycle to his sexuality GAH you toasted me.
Thank you so much for writing this, I read in the a/n that it took you over 2 years! Good for you for finishing and keeping it feel right from beginning to end regardless of the huge expanse of time.
I loved it and I love you! xoxo PB
| luckycullen chapter 29 . 10/8/2013
Yay, this halloween party seems interesting! I'm glad they had the talk about Peter, and I liked the way he apologized for hurting Bella... This line was awesome: "I knew you were damn near fucking perfect,"
| luckycullen chapter 28 . 10/7/2013
Wow, the best blow job in a library! Although I was afraid of him at first, possessive PAW is sexy as hell... Loved this: ""Can you leave your mouth with me while you're at work? Fuckers there won't mind. In fact," he smirked. "They'd probably be grateful."