|Reviews for A Pound of Flesh|
| jedigirlsc chapter 5 . 5/21/2010
aww love this story. E/B are frustrating each other but maybe there was a little bit of progress? Looking forward to the next chapter :)
| scrosby66 chapter 5 . 5/21/2010
Great chapter, seems that Edward has issues... Thanks for writing!
| MrsZ49 chapter 2 . 5/21/2010
Im not going to lie, Im not a big fan of the 3rd person, but sofar so good! I like this story!
Im excited to see how this all pans out. Im surprised to see her besties with James, and Leah is his sister, so far sounds like she has good people in her life! Very exciting indeed!
Thank YOU! :D
| ninjahobo chapter 4 . 5/20/2010
Is it just me or was that introduction HOT? Love this story already. Completely different to everything else.
| grrrr.edward chapter 4 . 5/20/2010
Oooh grrr he completely frustrates me and I LOVE it! Can't wait for more between these two!
| Melee03 chapter 4 . 5/20/2010
That was some first meeting. I loved how she stood up to him and wouldn't back down even when he tried to intimidate her. I cannot wait until the next meeting.
| sugar9030 chapter 4 . 5/20/2010
is it always gonna be in third person?
| amym9903 chapter 4 . 5/19/2010
I'm horrible I know, but I am reading this very intense, angry, hot chapter and all I can think of is where in the hell are they gonna find in a prison to get it on? I truly am very intrigued by this whole fic and can't wait to see what all you have in store for us! That chapter was very hot with all the fighting!
| amym9903 chapter 3 . 5/19/2010
It was him! So how old was he? 12-13maybe? I can't wait for more of this! I love her group of students and can't wait to see how you intergrate Edward into the mix. Will he remember her? Will she remember him?
| amym9903 chapter 2 . 5/19/2010
So you introduced Punkward and I'm so intruiged by his past. I must saythat I was suprised to see Jake as his best friend... interesting. Then a new character? Jamie? Who is already in love with our heroine and she of course (thank goodness) doesn't feel the same. I can't wait to see all this played out. Totally inthralled so far!
| amym9903 chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
Wow! What a horrible thing to happen to her! I was glad to see Chatlie as a more outspoken and affectionate person. I wonder... will Billy ever get over this terrible tragedy? Will Bella promise to still do good for others? And was that Edward that saved her, did she ever find out who that was that helped her? See I'm hooked already! Phenominal beginning!
| TropicOfCancer chapter 4 . 5/19/2010
Great chapter! Edward is a bit of an ass, but I know he is sweet underneath that tough armor. :) Bella is such a strong, brave woman...I'm really beginning to admire her. Can't wait to read more of this!
| xxxxxblankityblankxxxx chapter 4 . 5/18/2010
YAY! Bella and Punk Assward (new word learned from my fave author XD) meeting. I 3 this chapter. I cant wait to read the next.
| heyjued chapter 4 . 5/18/2010
Well, this story has already grabbed me. I love the fire between Edward & Bella. I know he's the one that pulled her out of the way when her father was being beaten. I'm wondering what will be the click that will make him remember her? Will it be her peachy scent? I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
| Kyuketsuki In Oki chapter 4 . 5/18/2010
What a volitile first meeting - as though I expected anything less, though.
If just their first meeting was that volitile, I wonder what will happen if . . . when . . . they are ever able to be together outside of those prison walls.
Which makes me think of something: do we know for how long Edward is incarcerated "this time"? Meaning, how much longer until he gets out of prison?