|Reviews for A Pound of Flesh|
| ImwithPatz chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
What a great story! I love your characterization of Emmett too! I am looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
| bellabee66 chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
Kudos Batman-Update soon...I can tell you this I don't like that Jamie character that much...and Emmett what a hoot! Can't wait to hopefully see Cullen in her class...
| princess07890 chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
This story sounds excellent so far! Cannot wait for more :)
| neoearthqueen30 chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
| branlc chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
Awww he still thinks about her. That's kinda sweet. I liked the intro of Emmett and Angela.
| Melee03 chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
Loved the introductions of the new characters.
Mike is so sleazy, while Emmett, Sam and Angela seem wonderful.
Looking forward to Bella and Cullen meeting.
| StormLondon chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
I'm thrilled you've started a new story! And am loving so far.
| BDDonovan chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
Slow burn is good!
This is totally minor, but the jump between story lines without any sort of acknowledgement throws me sometimes...I've had to re-read a few sentences to make sure I was understanding correctly. I can't decide if I like it or not. You did one jump in an earlier chapter that seemed to flow a little better, but the jump to Edward in the final part if this chapter was a little more abrupt.
Regardless, I'm absolutely loving the story- thanks!
| Meghaja chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
I can hardly wait until she meets Cullen.
| Raewright chapter 2 . 5/8/2010
I really like the third person pov. I think you did a great job with it. I especially like how you transitioned between the first scene and the second.
Very intrigued by what you seem to be setting up.
| Nanismo79 chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
i cant wait for this two to finally meet again lol
| eliza41 chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
This story is getting so good. Love the characters. Think Bella is going to do a great job teaching the guys. Think they are going to help her just as much as she will help them. Can't wait til she meets Cullen. Things should get very interesting.
| Amieforshort chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
Emmett seems cool, Mike, eh, not so much... Sounds like her first day went fairly well, I have to admit I was hoping she would meet up with Edward. Thanks for sharing, I look forward to the next installment.
| MindersN chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
I'm hooked. More more more - hurry!
| gossip-bangkok chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
Thank you so much!
Now, I'm really curious...
Can't wait for more
A great chapter.
Awww.. Sam is actually cool! :P
As for Emmett, he's such a cuddly teddy bear!