Reviews for A Pound of Flesh
DreamerRoad chapter 20 . 4/5
Yep, Edward is in her apartment... this should be fun.

And Alice knows who he is? Is she gonna let Bella is on this little, and kind of majorly important, piece of information?
DreamerRoad chapter 19 . 4/5
Oh my... that was pretty danged hot. And, Bella being conflicted was so angsty...

DreamerRoad chapter 18 . 4/5
Holy hotness for sure... and that's at the LIBRARY... can't even imagine what will happen at the park...

AND Jasper/Peter and Edward are FAMILY? Business partners AND family? I knew there would be a connection - but that? Nah, didn't see that coming.
DreamerRoad chapter 17 . 4/5
Well, I'd say that first outside the joint tutoring session went well, lol...

They're all kinds of sexy cute together.
DreamerRoad chapter 16 . 4/5
Holy ... yeah.

And then I sit here and try to remember what I was wondering earlier in the chapter - something about Jasper calling him... some papers to sign. Tangled web...
DreamerRoad chapter 15 . 4/5
What you said in the a/n... parole... and a perfect birthday present . :)

Great chapter.
DreamerRoad chapter 14 . 4/5
Not sure how much I'll get to read today. Interesting exchange between Jasper and Peter about Cullen. hmmm...

And, yeah, seems like Bella's in trouble if she thinks she's going to be fulfilled by a relationship with Peter when Cullen is... well... Cullen. :)
DreamerRoad chapter 13 . 3/29
Yep, I am looking forward to his parole...

And, I'm looking forward to reading some more - but not tonight. Bedtime for me.

Great story, I can see what it is such a popular, beloved story.
DreamerRoad chapter 12 . 3/29
The hard part about reading a completed fic, a nice long one at that, is that desire to go read the last chapter to see how it all ends up. ;)

Great chapter...
DreamerRoad chapter 11 . 3/29
I liked the lightness in this chapter, and the progress... and the hair touching ... and him calling her peaches... :)
DreamerRoad chapter 10 . 3/29
Okay, so now THIS is my favorite chapter thus far.

I'd be remiss if I didn't mention how much I adore Garrett.

And everything else in this chapter was - rewarding... :)
DreamerRoad chapter 9 . 3/29
Crap, Edward...

So interesting. So glad to be reading.
DreamerRoad chapter 8 . 3/29
Certainly is a fascinating character study - of both E & B. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
DreamerRoad chapter 7 . 3/29
So I've been hearing about PAW and Peaches for a very long time, it almost feels like a fandom secret being revealed to me by reading this, lol... My favorite chapter so far...
DreamerRoad chapter 6 . 3/29
Holy crap... I couldn't figure out how the ages worked to have him be the one that protected her back then... but crap. His Peaches, huh? Well, his Peaches is some kind of strong woman...
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