|Reviews for A Pound of Flesh|
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 47 . 11/25/2013
Sophie...that was BEAUTIFUL! You were stunned at 19,000 reviews; well let's make it 21,050! A TRUE testament to your writing ability and this story. You've completed this several years ago and people are still reading it and adoring it. Please keep it up for several more so those that are just finding out the beauty of Twilight and fanfiction will be able to enjoy this as well. Trust me...word of mouth is a wonderful thing.:)
I truly loved it and thank you for writing it.
| fiftyshadeofcullen chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
Wow..this chapter gave me goosebumps! Brilliant writing! Will defintley be reading the rest of the story :)
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 46 . 11/25/2013
Bravo! Way to go, Jas! I'm sssoooo glad he finally stood up to his asshole brother.:)
I'll marry his Punk Ass! *dreamy sigh*
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 42 . 11/25/2013
Under arrest? I'm thinkinig it's all for show so in case they're being watched, it looks more legitimate. They can't take a chance of anyone seeing that Edward may be cooperating with the Feds. Yeah...that's my theory.
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 40 . 11/25/2013
'My Renee', 'Charlie x' - Wow! Edward and Charlie really ARE alike in so many ways, aren't they? *swoon*
"Why?" Nana Boo shot back, "You afraid that he'll try to sell you an eight ball?" - Go Nana Boo! *fist pump*
Cullen fixed her with a stare that made Renee swallow hard. "Try sixteen years." - TAKE THAT, RENEE!
| divyvicki chapter 3 . 11/24/2013
So, we meet the list of characters. Another great chapter.
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 39 . 11/23/2013
'Some readers don't seem to understand the necessity or like the subplots of PoF (i.e Nessie/Aro/Agent Biers/Jacob) and, for this, I am sorry' - Please! Do NOT be sorry about that...I LOVE the subplots. That's what makes the story so much more intriguing and full of depth. If the story just contained Edward, Bella, and lemons...it would get so tiring and monotonous. Your subplots are really what's giving the story so much more character and makes the reader question what will happen next. It's wonderful!
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 38 . 11/23/2013
That poor beautiful broken man...I'm crying my eyes out!
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 37 . 11/23/2013
Yes, we're getting somewhere! I love Garrett's and Emmett's reactions to Edward! They were both hysterical and priceless! I have to say I LOVE Garrett in this story. He's such a wonderful man. I'm so happy PAW has him in his corner.
And I'm so happy Riley is going to hopefully help bring Jacob, Vanessa, and the child all together. *dreamy sigh*
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 36 . 11/22/2013
Vanessa...very intriguing. Is she working with a PI or something to get intel on her father to get him busted so Jacob can be safe?
I guess I'll have to keep reading...:)
| divyvicki chapter 2 . 11/22/2013
I can't wait for more. I'm thinking that Edward was the one who saved Bella when she and her Dad were attacked.
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 35 . 11/22/2013
W.O.W...Cullen packing his journal in Bella's suitcase with the added message was so PERFECT. My heart just melted and my eyes won't stop crying over that. I loved it.
And of course now reality has to hit and they haven't even been home a day yet. Our poor kids...will they ever get a break?
| divyvicki chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
I've had this on my To Read list forever! It was #17 of over 1000. Glad to finally get started and the first chapter was really intense! Great start!
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 33 . 11/21/2013
'It was her hormones. The fuckers were a curse.' - That's too funny that she cleans when she gets her period! I DO THE EXACT SAME THING! That's how I know I'll be getting my period the next day...I go on a cleaning spree!
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 32 . 11/21/2013
'She was Isabella Swan, and she was about to kick some ass.' - Go Nana Boo for knocking some sense into her and telling her to get off her pathetic sobbing ass and go get her man!
"What I would have preferred, Bella, was for me to have gone down to the lobby with your pussy juice still all over my face and fingers, and made him smell that shit just so he knew who you belonged to!" - *fans self* I think I need a cigarette after hearing that!
And now I'm bawling like a baby! How the hell do you do that?