Reviews for Making The Dead Smile
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
im in love of this story!
macat chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
NICE,make more soon,i mean more on this story! i love it soooo mutch )(
cthulhuus chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Awwh, that was adorable. ;w; I liked how you tied her in without making her Mary Sue, and everyone was in character. Cute.
StupidPyroChan chapter 1 . 6/24/2010




-Slaps self-

Ahem, excuse me.

That was so sad...

Poor Ellis, finally when someone wants to listen to him they die. Then become a ZOMBIE!

A witch none-the-less. O_o"

For reassurence your OC wasn't a Mary Sue. -w-"

I love this (Ooooh sooo saaaad!) story.
Robert DeWarren chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
My favorite part of the entire thing was that someone finally listened to Ellis. I spent the entire game wanting to hear the ending of atleast 1 of Kieths brilliant ideas, but noone would ever let him finish :(

Really good though, and a great, if sad, ending.
XCheeky.MonkeyzX chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
wow what a cute and beautiful short story loved it!
Phailen chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Great story! Your OC wasn't very Mary Sue-ish at all, at least she was as un-Mary Sue-ish as an OC can get in a one shot (no time for back stories, after all). The characters were believable and you stayed in line with the actual campaign.

I really like how you referenced the first game though, what with Keith's girl being named Krista. Tiny things like that always hook my interest...shows an author is dedicated, I suppose.

And yeah, Ellis is definitely the best L4D2 character. Never fails to make me grin with his in game conversations/stories.

Anyway, I'll cut this short before start (or keep on) rambling. Great read!