|Reviews for Making The Dead Smile|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
im in love of this story!
| macat chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
NICE,make more soon,i mean more on this story! i love it soooo mutch )(
| cthulhuus chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Awwh, that was adorable. ;w; I liked how you tied her in without making her Mary Sue, and everyone was in character. Cute.
| StupidPyroChan chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
I THINK I'M ABOUT TO CRY! TT_TT
Ahem, excuse me.
That was so sad...
Poor Ellis, finally when someone wants to listen to him they die. Then become a ZOMBIE!
A witch none-the-less. O_o"
For reassurence your OC wasn't a Mary Sue. -w-"
I love this (Ooooh sooo saaaad!) story.
| Robert DeWarren chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
My favorite part of the entire thing was that someone finally listened to Ellis. I spent the entire game wanting to hear the ending of atleast 1 of Kieths brilliant ideas, but noone would ever let him finish :(
Really good though, and a great, if sad, ending.
| XCheeky.MonkeyzX chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
wow what a cute and beautiful short story loved it!
| Phailen chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Great story! Your OC wasn't very Mary Sue-ish at all, at least she was as un-Mary Sue-ish as an OC can get in a one shot (no time for back stories, after all). The characters were believable and you stayed in line with the actual campaign.
I really like how you referenced the first game though, what with Keith's girl being named Krista. Tiny things like that always hook my interest...shows an author is dedicated, I suppose.
And yeah, Ellis is definitely the best L4D2 character. Never fails to make me grin with his in game conversations/stories.
Anyway, I'll cut this short before start (or keep on) rambling. Great read!