Hello
Cette histoire est passionnante et je suis admirative de votre travail. Le rythme de l’intrigue, le scénario tout comme les personnages et leurs dialogues étaient plausibles et savamment décrits.
Votre écriture est tout à fait correcte et la longueur même des chapitres est appréciable.
Vous avez habilement utilisé le canon tout en laissant votre imagination apporter les nouveautés qui rendent un récit addictif.
Un immense merci pour avoir partagé ce magnifique boulot avec les lecteurs de ffnet. Mes encouragements les plus féroces pour vos futurs projets vous accompagnent.
Prenez soin de vous.
L.

The power of friendship, Severus that's how.

Great story! Love what you did with the hallows!

This story is amazing! I stayed up all night to finish it!

This is going onto my top 5 list. I just read it all in one go. (I followed a story rec from someone else, can't remember who now..). It does not read like a story, it reads like a very good novel. I would gladly read any HP story you write.

I am not against slash sometimes, but I think in this story it would just really muddle things up for Harry. Let him have a dad and an uncle separately. I've been hoping that Harry's magic will let him remove that nasty dark mark.

You know, I'm not usually a fan of fics in which Severus becomes a mentor to Harry (they can work, don't get me wrong, but all too often I find they try to handwave how much of a bully Severus was towards students). This one, on the other hand, is incredible. Brilliant characterisation, a compelling plot, and such a clever approach to drifting AU that by the time we hit the kind of final status quo of characters and their relationships to each other it feels completely natural and reasonable that the story reached that point. Amazing!

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Ok why does Harry’s work ethic actually make me wanna be productive rn

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I like it very much, thanks.

thanks, Harry is very good to make a peace behind the families. I like it.

we have no christmass today, there is a spring and may now, but I can write, it was very succesfull to broke a diadem and to speak with parents Potters and Sirius and I wait to speaking with old grannie Potters from higland too. thanks You, it is very nice, Tonks will be healthy because no malediction will hurt her.

No flowers for Petunia? No more fresh air? Just shadow for ever? How decadent! I like Snape who helped Draco and Harry and Albus. It was very tired to travel around te World to looking for Potter and Dumbledore. Poore Lupin. Thanks.

thanks, I like it. I was surprice, with the stone and useing it. it is very nice.