Reviews for Removing the Variable
Andrea chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Hey, 'Sannah, told you I'd read some of your fanfic. Wish I knew more about your other worlds, but I was able to follow this one even though I'm a bit rusty on MacGyver too. Anyway, I was impressed how well you convey character through visual action, which is so essential to TV. Pete's illness and his response to it seemed at first merely a way to kick off a plot differently than the typical formula, so I was suprised that it turned out to be a major plot point. The suspense, right up to the last, of whether Murdoc had in fact provided the right antidote was intense. Must admit, the villain's motives were kinda murky, I guess I never watched enough MacGyver to become familiar with that character-is he just sadistic, or was there some other reason that he didn't just kill Mack as soon as he arrived? I mean, aside from the typical "fictional villains are not allowed to be as efficient or as vicious as real killers so that the hero has a sporting chance" reason.

Anyway, I really enjoy the banter and interplay between the main characters, and you describe your settings and action very clearly. I'd love to see filmed versions of anything you right, because I can just picture how it would look.
Lauren.MacFan chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
Great Mac vs Murdoc. The play-by-play was great. Some Murdoc stories can get too dark for me, but this one was perfect. Serious circumstances, yes, but they were successfully off set by the light-hearted commentary. Loved the interactions between Mac and the guy on the plane! Very nice.
Gunney chapter 2 . 7/8/2011
Love the humor. You've got an excellent handle on Mac's voice. Some of the moment to moment play by play can seem necessary to the story, and I struggle with keeping too much of it in my own stories. I find it slows the dialogue..but you have mixed the humor into the 'everday stuff' passages as well.
Gunney chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Love the phone conversation followed by, "Could'a fooled me."
Ozma chapter 8 . 11/4/2010
Hey, I enjoyed that a lot. There's not a lot of MacGyver fanfiction on this site.

Could you write another story with a handbell choir in it? Bet that's not a request you hear every day. :) But really, I play in a handbell choir, and we are one of the most unknown/misunderstood instruments out there. To understand handbells, go to youTube and look up "Now the Green Blade Riseth" and watch the one posted by charlottemcp
bluedragon1836 chapter 5 . 5/31/2010
Ooh, next chapter please!
steinbockkatze chapter 3 . 5/7/2010
a great story...
i love mac/murdoc storys...
pleace more...more...more...
Thx :-)
CatzChaos chapter 3 . 5/6/2010
Obsessed assassins! LOL. Awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
CatzChaos chapter 2 . 5/3/2010
Anticipation will keep me coming back... Great chapter. Are we going to see that annoying man again from the flight? Keep going please.
CatzChaos chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Great start... I had to snicker at the Cory Matthews name however, from Boy Meets World!...

Can't wait to see where this goes.