|Reviews for The Silver Rings|
| im-aggressive chapter 6 . 1/5/2013
First thing's first- Don't you dare give up this story, or I will scream.
Second- I do believe I love this:) I never thought of Martha in this sort of character, and this is VERY unique. I absolutely loved her answer to the officer's question. "Martha Stewart." I actually laughed out loud that that! So, wonderful work, and yo'd better update soon!
Thank you! :D
| Blackbird1313 chapter 6 . 7/11/2012
The quote at the begining used to hang up under pictures of my mom and uncle at my grandparent's house. :) This story is very heart-warming and sweet. Please continue. :) Pretty please?
| TheRoseShadow21 chapter 6 . 12/8/2011
So far ,l this has been a very good story .
Out of interst , is the story finished? I'd love to see more chapters-for example how she gets ahold of baby Yusei and Crow:0#
anyway , keep it up !
| randomperson chapter 6 . 8/14/2011
| Leemix chapter 6 . 7/16/2011
Ah, this was a humerous chapter to say the least. Some parts really made me crack up into laughter (which caused the room's occupants to look at me rather oddly...XD) So without futher ado, here's the BebePanda401 special for this here chapter today!:
Okay, first your charactization on Martha. It's absolutley brilliant. I love the idea that she was this once reckless, stubborn teenager (well, young person), whom has alot of pride. And that seems to have passed onto Jack, to say the least. Maybe that's why he's so much of an ass today. However, some things that could be considered: Martha is a proud woman, so I expect she would argue a little more than you portrayed her to. I'm not saying you made her guillible, but she could be a little more headstrong.
Also, from what I know, body language is a key factor in how Police or Security know how somebody is lying. It would have been a big help you had mentioned something like 'small beads of sweat', or 'her hands were mildly shaking'. That may have implied HOW he can tell, but that's just my inutition.
Also, the addition of Martha being able to produce her own milk for Jack at the end was...quite funny, but heartwarming at the same time. I can really sense the awkwardness in that scene, and I learned something new today :D
Good chapter, sorry if it isn't that long of a review :)
All in all, a perfect scene. ~BebePanda401
| SilverFalkin118 chapter 6 . 7/13/2011
Great job! I really liked it! Loved it! Keep up the amazing work! Update but take your time at it!
| Emperor Clovis chapter 5 . 7/10/2011
Wow, just waow. This story is written so well and I am enjoying it so far. I hope there is more to come. I always find stories about the minor characters to be more intriging than those about the main characters. Keep up the good work!
| pippa-pie chapter 5 . 7/7/2011
...This story is so well-written, I've read all five chapters just now :) Seriously. You are an amazing author, and I confess it made my day this morning when I checked the 5Ds archive and saw 2 new stories from you plus an update
I wish I could write a more in-depth review for this chapter, but I don't really know what to say. I like how you included Ushio, instead of just using a nameless officer. I like Lyman's reaction when he found out Martha was safe. The statistics were done well, just how you inserted them, for example how you wedged one in between two sentences when Lyman knocked on the door.
Good work, please update soon! Just curious, how many chapters do you have planned for this? :)
| iBelieveInAngels chapter 5 . 7/7/2011
Love it still! You're doing a fabulous job with Martha, I can really see the growth she's experiencing (even if she can't lol)
| SilverFalkin118 chapter 5 . 7/7/2011
This is really good! I loved it! Keep up the awesome work! Update but take your time at it!
| Ymmas chapter 4 . 3/3/2011
I like this story it's pretty go keep up the good work :)
| xWellJustMex chapter 4 . 11/6/2010
I really enjoyed reading it and I can't wait for what's next...
Maybe you could write how she ended up raising Yuusei and Crow.
| Kelisidina chapter 4 . 8/5/2010
Nice use of metaphorical phrases, I'm really enjoying your stories a lot. I also love how you portrayed Zora, very different but absolutely believable! The chapter was very sweet and satisfying.
Just one error...
"After she dressing herself" should be "After she dressed herself"
| dragonwitch250 chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
Great! I can't wait to read more. Update soon!
| SilverFalkin118 chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
Amazing~! I have been a fan of your work for a long time but finally had the courage to actually review to you~! Cause when I type or talk to people... I screw up most of the time... Anyways~! Please update soon~! But I'm not rushing you! Take all the time you need!