|Reviews for Ed, Edd, n Eddy Fallout: Saviors of the Wastes|
| Mojave Courier chapter 16 . 3/25/2013
Sorry about that unnecessary rant. Just pointing out that Kevin is not any better than the Eds, the other Kids, or the Kankers. I was surprised when Kevin betrayed the group and joined the Raiders, but when I think about it, I think it's a brilliant choice, having him become a bad guy. (I can give more examples of where Kevin was being an asshole for no real reason but that would take up some time.)
Don't worry about it, Tim! I know you're busy! Just try and write chapter when you have the time, OK? (Hey, I'm in college, too. I know how busy and stressful it can be.) Please stop writing this story! This is one of the best Ed, Edd n Eddy fanfics I have ever read. I don't know what else to say, (I'm tired, and it's night) so I'll say this: Good luck in college, and try not to fail!
| Mojave Courier chapter 13 . 3/25/2013
Well, jspyster1, I know it's been 2 years, but whatever. While you could say Kevin only harassed the Eds because they scammed him (which is true in some cases), here's another thing: he harassed the Eds even when they didn't do anything wrong. Sometimes, he bullies them just because they happen to be nearby. Watch ''Your Ed Here'' and ''Smile for the Ed'' and see if you can find anything sympathetic about Kevin in those episodes.
In ''Your Ed Here'', Kevin finds out what Eddy's middle name is (it's Skipper. Who names their kid Skipper?). Eddy begging Kevin not to tell anyone, promises to do whatever Kevin wants. Kevin blackmails Eddy into doing many humiliating tasks (such as KISSING Edd). And what does Kevin do after all this? He tells the Kids Eddy's middle name anyway, turning Eddy into a laughingstock for something that isn't even his fault. When all is said and done, Kevin just laughs and saunters off; in other words, he got away with it! Not only that, but for once, Eddy didn't do anything to piss Kevin off in this episode. Kevin just put Eddy through all that humiliation just for his own sick pleasure. No wonder so many fans wanted Kevin to die a horrible, painful death after that episode! (Hell, even the fans who didn't like Eddy were NOT AMUSED at Kevin's actions, and thought he had gone too far.)
| Unknown1613 chapter 16 . 12/30/2012
Just get over yourself and put the next chapters up.
| The Wanderer of Insanity chapter 16 . 12/9/2012
I LOVE THIS STORY. Although it's been long enough between chapters for me to forget a few characters, it is still a great read. Hopefully you can get the rest of the story up soon because this is just awesome.
| ShadowShades chapter 16 . 12/7/2012
Man what happened to Ed, Edd, n Eddy fanfiction. There was a time where I saw great stories like this gem all the time, but now it's just rehashed same old same old. Glad I got to read this update, and thankful that there's still some awesome Ed, Edd, n Eddy writers here.
Keep up the great work Tim
| KMF865 chapter 16 . 12/6/2012
Glad to see this story's not dead! Keep it up! :)
| Christiansoldier5 chapter 16 . 11/28/2012
even though dreaded life has made me forget mostly every single thing that happened in this story, this chapter was amusing. don't stop it now.
| godofmadness43 chapter 16 . 11/27/2012
heh wow, nice job, glad the gang's back together now the Raiders are in for real trouble!
| Duhastas the Dark chapter 16 . 11/27/2012
Not too shabby a chapter, I think. A few of the characters could have used a little more time in the limelight, but with the cast size, that would have been near impossible. Again, good chapter!
| crosswire chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
OK Normally I'm not a fan of crossovers, but Edd, Ed and Eddy in a post apocalyptic wasteland is a kick ass idea!
| Left4killing chapter 15 . 7/17/2012
omfg it's fucking good where's the next one?
| The Insanity Master chapter 15 . 7/16/2012
It's been like four f-king months since he last told us anything, and still no new updates.
| The Insanity Master chapter 14 . 1/10/2012
There's just one thing. the leader called Kevin by his name when he never mentioned his name to anyone. A little odd don't you think? Or as far as I know it could just be a typo lol.
| Jspy chapter 15 . 1/8/2012
Part 2 of my review:
Because this is mainly a combat chapter I won't be writing as much of a "play-by-play" review as in previous occurrences.
Good to have a change in perspective. I've been wondering what Eddy and co. have been up to.
I'm glad that you included General Barnaky in this story. Now I can imagine every line he says in the voice of R. Lee Ermey.
Once again, you have done a great job of orchestrating the battle scene. Commanders barking orders, tactical jargon being used, and plain old shooting makes the scene vivid and sound pretty plausible. This pretty much covers the majority of the chapter.
Also, I appreciate your inclusion of the super stimpack and its lesser known brother the ultra stimpack.
With Sarah in the clutches of Kevin and Marcus and co. launching an assault I am looking forward to read the next chapter.
| Jspy chapter 14 . 1/8/2012
A double chapter posting, what a pleasant surprise! This totally makes up for the hiatus. Now for Part 1 of my review:
I liked how you focused on the events, emotions, and relationships of some of the other characters in this chapter; Nazz, Rolf, and Kevin in particular. I'm glad that the Eds are not just the central focus of the story, as they wouldn't be anything without supporting characters.
One thing I thought was pretty neat was how you had one character witness the upcoming attack and then you switched to another character and told the story from their perspective. I noticed that you did this a few times during the current and the next chapter and I found it to be clever.
Wow, my prediction was correct. It seems as though Kevin was indeed captured by raiders and forced into their ranks. It was a little predictable, seeing as how Kevin is pretty much an antagonist, but I'm not complaining.
Yikes, the only thing I was thinking of when Kevin went on a drug binge was how much that stuff is going to mess him up in the future. Let's see if that prediction comes true.
Now I need you to clarify something for me. Kevin and the raiders are seen using working, motorized, vehicles. Presumably these vehicles run on fuel. I assume that you based the "Great War" in this story off the "Great War" from Fallout, which was started after nations fought for depleting resources, including oil and other fuels. Is the same true for your story? If so, how would the vehicles run if there is little to no oil left in the world? People criticized Fallout: Tactics about this too. To be fair, Fallout 2 featured a working, running car that ran on Microfusion Cells. You can probably fix this plothole by stating that the vehicles also run on a powerful electric engine powered by fusion.
Another Marcus, what a coincidence. At least he comes from a vault that actually existed. 7 OC's down 1 to go.
You've done a great job of orchestrating that battle scene. Combined with the switches in POV it made for a truly spectacular read.
With the way the plot unfolded I can't wait to see how the group will deal with Kevin. In all, another outstanding chapter. But let's be honest; did you expect anything less?
Stay tuned for Part 2.