|Reviews for Intertwined|
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/23/2013
Update soon please!
| Midorikohime chapter 7 . 12/13/2012
me encanta ya quiero ver que sigue
| Fasak chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
I didn't even finish the story ('cuz is late) but I already know that is awesome
| cloudfarron chapter 7 . 2/28/2012
this is one of my favorite fics keep it up :)
| 261 chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
glad tifa did it, before his gone...
| jizang chapter 7 . 6/17/2011
Could you please write more chapters cause this story is really good
| Blood-Hawk-531 chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Kay, I get really irritated when people make this mistake. Lightning's real name is CLAIRE, not ECLAIR! She is a person, not a f &%ing pastry!
| some random dude chapter 7 . 10/15/2010
Whoa! When was the last time you updated? Anyway, good to see you're back. Keep up the good work :)
| NeoKyo2k3 chapter 4 . 5/4/2010
I like the name you gave for their new business, it fits them well .
Great story by the way, hope you update soon D
| fusion90XXXX chapter 4 . 5/3/2010
What a cool name for a business. Cloud Lightning equals Storm.
| 7th fire chapter 3 . 5/2/2010
dammit write more!
| Kuchiki-chan613 chapter 3 . 4/30/2010
Amazing i love it please write more and keep up the awesome job :3
| fusion90XXXX chapter 3 . 4/28/2010
Things are getting interesting now. Those death glares Lightning gives are funny.
| fusion90XXXX chapter 2 . 4/28/2010
I sense the love coming.
| Chaotic Symphony chapter 3 . 4/27/2010
great story so far, loving the simple interaction between Cloud and Lightning can't wait for more!