Reviews for My Last Few Days With You
Jay chapter 9 . 2/17
So I've just now started to get into this story and I just have to complain that there is entirely too much detail in this story. I know you want to capture the scene perfectly and all, but it's just too much at times. For example, the audience really didn't need to know that when Kuuki arrived home she didn't just park, she "stopped, put her emergency break on, shifted gears to park..." etc. It's just monotonous. Also, if Sora got a sunburn and the very next day was taken to the hospital, it would still take some more time to diagnose him. Theyd have to run tests and be sure that it was what they thought it was before giving him a definite yes or no. Also, I'm assuming the skin cancer he developed was some form of carcinoma, particularly basal cell carcinoma. It's one of the most common skin cancers and different from malignant melanoma in the way that BCC develops as a flesh colored or reddish lump rather than a dark mole. I would also like to point out that if the doctors somehow caught the cancer after one freaking day his survival chances are entirely in his favor. So this has to be some freaky cancer if he gets sick. I don't wanna sound like a bitch, I just appreciate it when the author spends some time researching to make their story more realistic. I intend to read the entire story, so I'll update on how my opinion has changed throughout the story.
Guest chapter 20 . 12/6/2016
For now is a very lovely story, I enjoy the balance from sadness and happyness, and it's also very long! Great job dude
supernoob257 chapter 70 . 11/30/2016
Finish please?
MackBlade chapter 39 . 6/20/2016
Well they are using a space ranger themed attack so who knows...XD
Chicoco Phantomhive chapter 70 . 6/13/2016
First, Wecome back, and second please continue to update :)
From: Chicoco Phantomhive
MissMerezy chapter 70 . 6/11/2016
I hope you're planning to continue with your goal of writing at least a few words a day... I don't think I can wait another year for the next chapter! XD

This was really nice to read. You portrayed the different emotions very well. When Kairi was sneaking downstairs, my heart was racing too! XD

The scenes between Kairi and Sora, even in thought of the other, were very, very sweet and heartwarming.
I'm quite looking forward to seeing how this will all end!

Excellent chapter. :)
relena soulheart chapter 69 . 1/6/2016
Welcome back! :D i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! Keep up with the amazing work!
Mere-Mere chapter 69 . 1/5/2016
2) *squeeee* it's so WONDERFUL to read your writing again! Absolutely fantastic! I have missed it so much! :D
3) This chapter was wonderful. I laughed in places... cried in others. (Yes, I actually cried... Though that's probably not unusual for me. XD)
You are a very talented author, Lex. Words are easy enough to write into sentences, but if you can emotionally move your audience, that's a job well done. the only thing I would point out is that typically it takes someone with cancer getting really sick over a few weeks/days before they die... the last two weeks that my grandpa had was spent really sick and sleeping in the hospital... they don't just... fall over, which it seems Sora might or might not... typically if a doctor was to tell someone they had two weeks, then the two weeks wouldn't be perfectly healthy seemingly...
But it's still been a really good story, and who needs all those medical mumbo jumbo technicalities anyway? XD

Anyway, I'm so looking forward to the final chapter! I must know how it ends! You've done a great job with keeping the readers totally in suspense this whole time. :D I hope that the final chapter will be out soon.
Best of luck to you with the writing! :D
Spiderfan626 chapter 21 . 4/21/2015
Wait do they know?
Spiderfan626 chapter 14 . 4/21/2015
Please tell me this has a happy ending.
Spiderfan626 chapter 6 . 4/21/2015
Uh-oh. Poor Sora.
Spiderfan626 chapter 2 . 4/21/2015
Moral of the story so far. Always were sunscreen when going to the beach. Good start.
SavSilvy chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
Hi! Do you plan on updating soon? Please reply ASAP so I know whether to expect or not :((
Nzguy20 chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
please update
relena soulheart chapter 68 . 6/19/2014
I can't wait until the next chapter. While reading this story, I kept thinking about the people out there who are also suffering from cancer. I sure hope Sora survives. Not just for the sake of the story, but also for the sake of those who have or had cancer. This story truly is inspirational..
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