|Reviews for Ink Pots and Candles|
| Larry Hotter chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
LOL! You got the twins PERFECT!
Absolutely loved their tone and way of finishing each others lines.
| MagixDiana chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Lol, I loved this. It was a very humorous twin fic, especially when it was revealed that Angelina was the little girl. The characters were completely IC, and I love the fact that Fred and George finished each other's sentences. It's adorable and slightly confusing, but it's definitely something they love to do. This was a good use of both prompts, and it was something I enjoyed reading. My favorite part was when Molly got angry and began choking Fred. Poor guy. Of course, he totally deserved it. Anyways, great fic, going in my Faves!
| Rameelia chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
This is great. I absolutely loved your dialogue! It flows smoothly, and I did appreciate that your twins talked in full sentences... for the most part. :) I also liked how they managed an angry Molly, though I guess they've had plenty of practice before, haven't they? :D
| CityGirl419 chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
Haha I love Fred and George Fics! This is really funny! I loved the way they kept finishing each other's sentences! So funny! Your a really good writer. And I love how you worded everything! So great!
| psycho-pink-faerie chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
This was absolutely brilliant. :D I've never read a fic where Fred and George are so in character and this was just perfect. I like the way you made it humourous and how the story didn't really become clear until the end of the fic. The dialogue was witty and quick, and really, I could find no fault with it. Perfect!
| Julia Claire chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
I loved Fred and George here and thier dialogue was fabulous!
| GrimmauldPhoenix chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Hilariously written, and superbly canon! Bravo!
| Titania Took chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
I love it! Especially the way the story unfolds piece by piece so that you don't know what's happening until the end.
This was kinda different to what i had been expecting from the prompt, but hilarious. It sounds like just the kind of thing that happens... The cat, and then the ink pot, and then the candle...
| Ariana Ethaitrius chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
I love this story; I like how you use the twins speaking half a sentence each. This was interesting:)
| xabandonedaccountx chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
Oh those meddling twins. Love it! Hilarious and hard to keep up with the twins dialogue but I think Molly would have had an even harder time.
| respitechristopher chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
I have never - and I mean never - read any fanfiction writer who captured the back-and-forth of a Gred and Forge conversation as well as you did here. That was just brilliant. I'm sure I only got half of it, but surer still that Molly got less than that.
And the Rube Goldberg way that everything went down in Mr Johnson's office - so perfect for them. This was absolutely wonderful. Congratulations!
| Princess Gillybean chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
I love it! It was hilarious. I loved Molly, and the twins dialogue was fabulous :)
| Mistical Ninja chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Hahaha, Awesome twist on the prompts. Absolutely awesome. _
Very well done Sher.
| Schermionie chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Very amusing. It made me laugh (especially when we found out the girl was Angelina) - as it should, having Fred and George in it. I spotted some mistakes, but on the whole your grammar is excellent, and most of the time I was too distracted by how creative this was to worry about that. I got a little confused, but then that's bound to happen in a long conversation with these two. I think the characters were wonderfully IC, and this was definitely an entertaining read. Well done.
| Free Dreamer Night Writer chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Loved it. Very in character and humorous. The twins were perfect and the little girl being Angelina was a nice twist.