Reviews for A Chance in Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Groundbreaking. Groundbreaking it was. In 9 years that I spent reading fanfiction I've never read any of that "time-travelling" stories. I don't even know why. I just didn't like the idea, I guess. And the fact that travelling back in time would mean too little an age-difference... But something about that work got me. I gave it a try - and died of a heart-attack right on chapter 1, the scene in the hospital wing. Remus - OMG! And then I just couldn't stop. I was shivered, I was hot and cold and nauseous and moaning and shrieking and whining and weeping. So believable, so painful - and so relieving in the end. It was a bliss, your masterpiece, thank you so much for your work \P.S. If some of my sentences would seem strange to you - that's, probably 'cause my native language is belarussian _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I kind of wish Hermione would’ve made a dirty comment asking you Severus was a good baker too |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know for your story you've changed a bit of Dumbledore's history, especially having him involved with Minerva. But, it always gets me, both in canon and in fan fiction just how manipulative Dumbledore is. Harry said it best in Deathly Hallows when he told her that he didn't know who Dumbledore cared about, but it definitely wasn't Harry. That's true. Dumbledore, even in canon had many opportunities to defeat Voldemort without setting up a child for slaughter, but never did because he believed the prophecy was more important. And, he wanted to be Master of Death. In many ways, and without the Hallows, he was master of death because his choices, his manipulations killed so many, especially on his own side of the war. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why she sound stupid in here ? |
![]() ![]() Fantastico |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cried too... |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh shit. help |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bruhhh girl get better at acting this is a bit painful to witness lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Snape seems to speak proper so he would most likely say undergarments |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished... Very much enjoyed the whole story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a beautiful story, and extremely well written! I'd like to add, it's a testament to your writing skills that this contains that many "smut" scenes, without ever becoming repetitive or boring! It is well known, writing smut isn't easy. Your interweaving of humor and angst is also exemplary! Excellent work! BRAVO! Now I'm off to read your next story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an amazing twist on the time turner fic. Thank you. Most enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() So you wrote Harry as the ass. Okay, but Ron really is an ass. |
![]() ![]() If you can't change things what's the point in going bsck |