Reviews for A Chance in Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a wonderful, amazing story. Thank you so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Slughorn was the potion Professor... enjoying this thoroughly though :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Weird. Pretty sure Lily had always defended Snape. And he lashes out at times when embarassed. Thats the very reason why they stopped being friends in the first place. If he lashed out at Lily, his best friend for many years, and a woman he loves, then I find his reaction to Hermione, someone he barely even knows to be a bit OOC. Other than that, everything else is pretty good so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely story. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just... my heart is breaking at this point because if/when H returns, S is supposed to be dead. so I'm really hoping you have some sort of happy ending here... |
![]() ![]() I don't know if you noticed this or not but one of your paragraphs was repeated. Love your story tho, I've read this like 5 times now. ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() very sweet. Dumbledore is so nice in this story that it's OOC |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() you should edit out this note since it's not a chapter, nor relevant anymore |
![]() ![]() ![]() good set up, but I don't get the Albus/Minerva pairing. he's gay and they just don't go together |
![]() ![]() ![]() fantastic opening |