Reviews for A Chance in Time
HarryPGinnyW4eva chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Good! Really good beginning. I loved the scene with her waking up. I look forward to loads more, as you know I truly enjoy your writing and am thrilled to see you putting out another story! :-) Thanks! HG4eva
Binnybai chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
really loved the other stories you wrote :D! so can't wait to read this one. Seems really interesting so far
DoctorFang chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
im really interested to see where this goes. it's definitely a good start, so please update soon!
Prissz chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Oh I am so excited that you are writing a new story. I loved "Testing Out" and "Wanting and Waiting". I absolutely love your stories and don't mind reading one of your stories that is in progress. Usually I hate reading in progress stories because I wind up getting hooked on a story and then the author abandons it...UGH.

I love the first chapter. I did notice several spelling mistakes though. Here are the corrected names:

Pomfrey, Trelawney, Mcgonagall

I am looking forward to a new chapter :-)
Anubis Ankh chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Madam Pomfrey and Professor McGonagall.

You mispelled the names.

Otherwise, it's a promising start.
Slytherinbookworm1214 chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Love it i must have more. Minervas last name is spelled mcgonagall. Sorry so short will do better nxt time. Promise. Update soon. Pretty pretty please with severus on top? Pun intended lol
Me14 chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
i don't normally read time travel stories, i've only actually read one other than this, but i will def be reading yours! I'm very interested in seeing where this is going. i hope you update soon!
teddy240b chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Good - keep going
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