Reviews for A Chance in Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good! Really good beginning. I loved the scene with her waking up. I look forward to loads more, as you know I truly enjoy your writing and am thrilled to see you putting out another story! :-) Thanks! HG4eva |
![]() ![]() ![]() really loved the other stories you wrote :D! so can't wait to read this one. Seems really interesting so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() im really interested to see where this goes. it's definitely a good start, so please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I am so excited that you are writing a new story. I loved "Testing Out" and "Wanting and Waiting". I absolutely love your stories and don't mind reading one of your stories that is in progress. Usually I hate reading in progress stories because I wind up getting hooked on a story and then the author abandons it...UGH. I love the first chapter. I did notice several spelling mistakes though. Here are the corrected names: Pomfrey, Trelawney, Mcgonagall I am looking forward to a new chapter :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Madam Pomfrey and Professor McGonagall. You mispelled the names. Otherwise, it's a promising start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it i must have more. Minervas last name is spelled mcgonagall. Sorry so short will do better nxt time. Promise. Update soon. Pretty pretty please with severus on top? Pun intended lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() i don't normally read time travel stories, i've only actually read one other than this, but i will def be reading yours! I'm very interested in seeing where this is going. i hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good - keep going |