Severus’s CHEATING on the contraceptive potion is NOT acceptable at all. Hermione should know what she is drinking. If she wants a third child, she will stop drinking the potion with her complete consciousness. What you’ve written has nothing to do with sweetness, but disrespect and selfishness.

I wonder if he watched enough of her first year to know that she was the one who set his robes on fire when Harry's broom was jinxed.

oh that was lovely! I had a feeling Fred made it, and even though you foreshadowed Severus saving Sirius, I totally didn't think he would! Thank you for this!

lol, I knew she was about to faint.

Thank you!

I think this has to be one of my all time favorite fanfics. I absolutely loved it. Thanks so much for sharing.

Groundbreaking. Groundbreaking it was. In 9 years that I spent reading fanfiction I've never read any of that "time-travelling" stories. I don't even know why. I just didn't like the idea, I guess. And the fact that travelling back in time would mean too little an age-difference... But something about that work got me. I gave it a try - and died of a heart-attack right on chapter 1, the scene in the hospital wing. Remus - OMG! And then I just couldn't stop. I was shivered, I was hot and cold and nauseous and moaning and shrieking and whining and weeping. So believable, so painful - and so relieving in the end. It was a bliss, your masterpiece, thank you so much for your work

\P.S. If some of my sentences would seem strange to you - that's, probably 'cause my native language is belarussian
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Loved this!

I kind of wish Hermione would’ve made a dirty comment asking you Severus was a good baker too

I know for your story you've changed a bit of Dumbledore's history, especially having him involved with Minerva. But, it always gets me, both in canon and in fan fiction just how manipulative Dumbledore is. Harry said it best in Deathly Hallows when he told her that he didn't know who Dumbledore cared about, but it definitely wasn't Harry. That's true. Dumbledore, even in canon had many opportunities to defeat Voldemort without setting up a child for slaughter, but never did because he believed the prophecy was more important. And, he wanted to be Master of Death. In many ways, and without the Hallows, he was master of death because his choices, his manipulations killed so many, especially on his own side of the war.

why she sound stupid in here ?

Fantastico

I cried too...

oh shit. help

Bruhhh girl get better at acting this is a bit painful to witness lol