Reviews for Win Win
CarolineSC chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Fun one shot
Your bf Jenny chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
I know how much you like these reviews, but I can't say it's going to be sophisticated, lol. Probably what stood out most to me is this is how I would personally want to make love and seeing you write like this makes me know we're more than just diaper buddies. I can't wait to see the rest of your work and watch your progression in talent. Oh, and I very much liked all of the hip movements she was doing on to and then the doggy at the end. I'm not sure if I can say this on here but it sure got me ready for some fun!
Lov2-Travel chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Love your Win Win universe:)) Puckleberry/Smuckelberry is my Favorite!

~elle
rawr.rawr.RAWR chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
love. Just, love. I generally stay away from one-shots, as they seem more like teasers to me than full meals, but you have seriously made me consider my prejudice as unfounded. But yeah, you are a fantastical human being, and I love you.
tigertaz chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
OMG, what can I say? This was fucking awesome! I don't think I would ever be able to write smut like you and goingadvantage.
Xo.LovelyWonder.Xo chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
So I love Puckelberry so much, and the way you write it makes Me smile. Smuckelberry is like my new favorite word. The established relationship is actually kinda perfect. So many people make him construction and other suff but I like to think he'd be a good gutiarist. Totally a wonderful oneshot! Can't wait to read more, and you update chase the Morning!
Maiqu20 chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
Absolutely loved it
bloodyblond chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
I think Smuckelberry may be my new favorite word. It also makes me suspiciously hungry for jam...

Excellent story, I love future fics, cause they make me feel good to know others, besides myself, see a future with these two.

Now if only Ryan Murphy would get that, we'd be set.
Sassy26 chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
In a word, HOT. Glad I didn't review the first time I read it, coz I've got to read it again and have given myself pleasant tingles...

Love the established relationship and the demonstrable closeness between them.

Also adored this line: 'To anyone else, the change would be unnoticeable. But to him, because he was absurdly attuned to her body just as she was to his, the difference was like night and day.'

Great job bb!
ChamberlinofMusic chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
WOW! Simply intense and extremely fun to read! :)
Viktorija chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Loved it!:)
brookemopolitan chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
omgsh, i did read this a while ago! i'm sorry for not reviewing
it definately put me at the edge of my seat *wink wink*
GoingVintage chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Sorry I'm just now getting around to this review but that is some SERIOUSLY HOT Smuckleberry. SERIOUSLY. Like, brain melting...

I love that they're in an established LTR and that he knows her body so well... It makes it not only HOT as hell but sweet because they're obviously in love and there is NOTHING BETTER than Puck and Rachel in love!

Great, great job!
maggiequeen chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
this was so hot! you did an awesome job!
Wonderlandgabby chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
*blinks* um...that was like really hot...yeah...but sweet at the same time...

a little speachless here LOL
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