such an amazing chapter ... the feeling of young love ...sigh...

Hope you will give them an epilogue

wonderful story thank you for sharing!

OMG! This is such a beautiful and original story
I’m in love with Bella and Edward’s love story. Your amazing writer, I felt like I was there in every chapter.
Please, please, please keep writing or write and epilogue for us to enjoy Bella and Edward’s kids and married life.
Congrats for this incredible fanfic.

I can’t wait to read the epilogue! I’m sure i willlove it as much as I loved the rest of the story.

Oh God, I loved it! Jazzward is dreamy! I just wish we'd known what happened with Jasper and Alice! And was Rosalie pregnant again? Did Bella and Edward have children? How many? Boys or girls? An epilogue would have been nice but I loved it all! Thank you for writing this!

thank you so much for sharing this absolutely AWESOME ! story with us ;) I hope you come back to post the epilogue soon ;D

Bella is selfish

This was a fantastic story. I absolutely enjoyed it. I'm off to read more of your other written works.

thanks for this awesome story! Loved the way Bella and Edward grew up, so sweet!

It's been several years since I last read this beautiful story. Interestingly, I only remembered the Alice and Jasper parts! I so enjoyed the emotion and growth of Bella as I felt like I was rediscovering her quiet strength!

Hello Jen, I am not sure the story should have stopped there. Some loose ends are still dangling in the wind. Hopefully the epilogue is on your home page and a proper conclusion for a beautiful story is there as well.
Thx for sharing these characters with us. I adored them.

Hello. So on the age restrictions are they a hundred percent nesasary. Because I saw this fanfic mentioned in the last so far chapter of When Duty Meets Desire. So just asking. The reason I’m not really concerned about the age restrictions is one because I loved your other fanfics like Smolder and When Duty Meets Desire. And two because I’m ok with the fanfic if it’s anything like When duty meets desire. If you are offended by anything I said or have a problem with it I am truly sorry and I apologize.

Man I loved this story so much that although I understand that you could have gone on forever writing more about Edward & Bella...it honestly didn't wrap everything up so if I'm honest, I'm feeling a bit disappointed.

Bella definitely grew into a more confident woman and I enjoyed reading how she got there. Edward loves her so much and you can feel that everytime you write about their interactions or when you give us an EPOV. I just wish we could have gotten more of their newly married life at home and how they are getting along in their new routine as husband & wife. I'd love to know what happened with Alice & Jasper and Emmett & Rose...was she indeed pregnant? I meant to write in the last 2 chapter reviews that I thought it was horrible Alice hadn't made it home for Bella's wedding...Edward sacrificed his honeymoon for them to be together.

Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this story and I think I wrote in my first review that I love these time period fics...the innocence of this time is so sweet. I wish there was more... You mentiond an epilogue but this story hasn't been updated in like 7 years so I guess that never happened which really bums me out because I would have loved to get a glimpse into their future.

Loooove your lemons...so hot! How the heck is this gonna be over in only one more chapter...I'm so confused & sad...