Reviews for Lan's Journey to Success
SHUT IT chapter 4 . 6/7/2014
END IT NOW
YOUR MOM chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
"Young lady your grounded!"...what the
Heck did I just read
LanXMayl chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
2 years and still no update :((
Guest chapter 4 . 7/23/2012
great job on the story its superb
Guest chapter 4 . 7/23/2012
update another chapter please
TheFanReader chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
i wish this happened 2 me
122boy chapter 4 . 12/27/2010
Inloventhe story please update
axeloftheflame chapter 4 . 10/29/2010
for ideas how about priness pride comeing over she is pretty smart maybe that will help lan or not. but maylu will get irrtated at them both and do somethig very bad your the writter. but loved your story very much hope you writte more
Lan chapter 4 . 10/24/2010
Mabel you should just try them out of control and just having sex (plus few pics)
Guest93 chapter 4 . 10/20/2010
maybe

other sports,

math,

voccabulary tests,

some outdvhool stuff like

cleaning or cooking

as an other present maybe kisses( or photos...)

An chapter about MM and Roll what they do during the "study" lessons of their Net-OPs

Thats nothing but an Idea
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 4 . 8/12/2010
OK THAT ONE WAS NICE I SUPPOSE, BUT I SORTA PREFER WOMEN. I DON'T KNOW HOW YOU CAN MAKE IT MORE PEVERTED, I MEAN THERE'S S&M, OR ROLEPLAY. OH YOU COULD TOTALLY DO SOMETHING WHERE THEY MAKE A BET THAT THE OTHER IS FORCED TO DO EVERYTHING THE OTHER ASK OF ONE, THAT WOULD BE FUN, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
PokeFan444 chapter 3 . 8/3/2010
please write more! Your doing an amazing job.
megemanfan chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
you should have made it go longer so that one of them ended up naked
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 3 . 6/21/2010
SO YOU'RE JUST GONNA END IT WITH SIMPLE STRIPPING? CAN'T YOU PUT IN A LEMON, OR MAYBE SOME OTHER EXTRA ADD INS TO THE GAME? LIKE MAYBE WINNER GETS EXTRA THRID BASE ACTION, OR WINNER GETS A MINUTE FEEL, OR SOMETHING ALONG THE LINES,
Kevingcat chapter 3 . 6/21/2010
O.o Ummmm Thanks for Mentioning me :) I am REALLY happy that you used my suggestion! And I do have other Ideas for this if yea want em
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