Reviews for Hitman: The Hitting
Anonymous chapter 1 . 2/8
Its...Perfect
Dude chapter 1 . 9/17/2017
I don't know if this is a troll or really unintentionally bad (like Asian and Adjacent 47), but i really like it.
ac chapter 6 . 7/27/2017
pls make more 10/10 fanfic
TheIronGolem chapter 1 . 7/22/2017
Still a better story than Twilight.
LT Rex Cole chapter 1 . 7/17/2017
Hey, I don't know if you know this, but a gmodder called seibmoz made animations of these chapters.

Link: watch?vUHD8nYMDOYY&listPLkrN7YGL2m-RiU2UQqDRBseLA_A_gU959
anon chapter 6 . 7/7/2010
"47 put on a football helmet so people wouldn't recognize him."

ROFL. Yeah, totally being serious.

Seriously though, I'd be interested if you actually do a story where you write with your full abilities. Not that your spoof isn't entertaining, but there's always plenty of badfic to go around, and decent writers? Not so many.
Dude chapter 4 . 5/23/2010
You were doing great, but Chapter 4 has fewer errors in it, which made it less funny for me. I hope you keep writing like you did before. By the way, you are very good at this genre!
Gordon Frohman chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
Awful. Refine your sentence structure or rate it kids.
Dude chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
BRAVO! This was amazingly funny, and you didn't let the stupidity get the better of your story! We need more fics like this one!