|Reviews for Hitman: The Hitting|
| Dude chapter 1 . 9/17
I don't know if this is a troll or really unintentionally bad (like Asian and Adjacent 47), but i really like it.
| ac chapter 6 . 7/27
pls make more 10/10 fanfic
| TheIronGolem chapter 1 . 7/22
Still a better story than Twilight.
| LT Rex Cole chapter 1 . 7/17
Hey, I don't know if you know this, but a gmodder called seibmoz made animations of these chapters.
| anon chapter 6 . 7/7/2010
"47 put on a football helmet so people wouldn't recognize him."
ROFL. Yeah, totally being serious.
Seriously though, I'd be interested if you actually do a story where you write with your full abilities. Not that your spoof isn't entertaining, but there's always plenty of badfic to go around, and decent writers? Not so many.
| Dude chapter 4 . 5/23/2010
You were doing great, but Chapter 4 has fewer errors in it, which made it less funny for me. I hope you keep writing like you did before. By the way, you are very good at this genre!
| Gordon Frohman chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
Awful. Refine your sentence structure or rate it kids.
| Dude chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
BRAVO! This was amazingly funny, and you didn't let the stupidity get the better of your story! We need more fics like this one!