|Reviews for Proper Jurisdiction|
| Aimee chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
This is a great story, really well written, you captured Sawyer and Kate's characters beautifully. However, I really feel that this needs another chapter to tie everything up and to give the story a more satisfying ending.
| MythStar Black Dragon chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
LOVED IT WAS PERFECT THEM
| Col chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
Started very promising, but what an ending was that?
| modernxxmyth chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
That was wonderful.
| Animorphgirl chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
*shakes head* No, that is not an ending. You have to continue after that! Nice job, great writing, but you either need to make Sawyer help Kate get away or add at LEAST one more chapter. You are not getting off that easy.