|Reviews for Pretending To Live|
| BlackFrost4 chapter 27 . 9/17
hey. I read the whole story. i well have a habit of reviewing at the end of the story so I couldn't praise you and the story earlier. the story was by far one of the best I ever read. I loved your style from the start (you didn't havto cringe). and even with the usualy kinda impossible plot, you made it believable. I fell in love with the characters as well. my exams like a day away and i'm still hooked on this story, its 12 pm my mums chewing me out and I'm still writing this review. I guess I really wanted to say yiu're awesome, the story is awesome and ill miss it. I look forward to reading other stories from you.
| GreenOnBlack chapter 27 . 9/12
Honestly, one of the best I've read so far. Many thanks.
| Guest chapter 27 . 8/27
One word...breathtaking! I am no kidding. I know you probably won't read this because the story ended a long time ago but I need to write this and hey, maybe you will find a moment.
I just wanted to say that this was the best story I've read...and I've read quite a lot. Just one word..Tom. I've never read so..how to say it...acurate discription of character. Not many people can get him right but you've done a wonderful job! And Ari..brilliant character! Seriously...what she felt, I felt and I would be lying I'd say that I didn't cry..I did and not just once.
This story has everything...it is funny, very sweet, veery dramatic and above all...connected. Nothing was happening without reason and I just love it.
So this became longer than I wanted so I won't bore you any longer. Just..it's wonderful story and I'll read it again, and again and again. Thank you for writting this! And just so you'd know..you have amazing way with words! I wish I could write like this!
| Guest chapter 27 . 6/27
Wow... Where to start? This story is amazing from the start. The characters were so well developed,and it was a really interesting idea you had with the whole time thing. I was amazed at how you managed to explain every comlplicated idea, and you clearly took a lot of time to plan this. I only just discovered this fic, and I swear I could just not put it down. Congratulations on finishing your first ever multi chartered story, and keep writing. You have masses of talent!
| Guest chapter 27 . 5/28
This is so beautiful!
| Guest chapter 27 . 4/25
I wonder what happened to Draco
| akagami hime chan chapter 27 . 3/20
Okay, I wasn't going to review because this story is from years ago and I don't really think you'll read it but wow. I just have to tell you that this is one of the most beautiful time travel! fics I've found in this fandom. At some points I thought about not reading it anymore because I could see the emotional pain and the angst that you were going to put me through and oh man you did but I couldn't stop and here I am. Typing while trying to look for a tissue in my room because I can't stop crying. This story made me really emotional and I love the character development of Ari and Tom.
Thank you so much for taking the time to write and post this story.
I'm so glad I found it.
| Ria chapter 27 . 2/28
I've read this so, so many times and each time it'd bring both tears and smiles to my face!
| DarleenFaux chapter 1 . 1/3
All can say is - YOU ROCK. This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. I came across this story while looking for something to cheer me up and I absolutely fell in love with this. And the time travel - AWESOME.
| Ally chapter 27 . 10/15/2015
Hi can you please write another tom riddlexOC story?
| reader chapter 27 . 10/13/2015
props to using the final phrase of the series,
great story :)
| Emilise284 chapter 27 . 8/10/2015
Beautifully written. Wonderfully composed. Thank you.
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/3/2015
Well, that isn't good.
| Guest chapter 27 . 8/3/2015
This story was incredibly well written and beautiful. A pleasure to read. :)
| Ahsilaa chapter 20 . 7/6/2015
Wow. If really like to know what was going through his head at the time.