That was almost a good story. The ending didnt make any sense to me. Interesting read up to that point.

The best fanfic on this site! Many thanks to the author. Just an amazing time! I really hope that one day you will give us a new fantasy world again.

i have honestly hoped he would have wiped the Others along with the Ori. Anubis punishment really doesnt make sense with their noninterference politics. Why could they descend Daniel and remove all his knowledge but not Anubis.
Moreover when they gave him clear shot at dealing with Anubis after knowing he is ascended, he should have been developing actual way to combat ascended. Either discovering Sangreal or developing similar technology on his own. now we dont even know if they will survive of if they will be paying for next several thousands of years for Omas mistake while Others have great show.

It's not logical, Harry by his own admission was lazy academically thus the complete education he have is that of a lazy student... so incomplete by definition.

Yet he decide to only stay until 2 days later and never come back.

Illogical and half assed effort to not replay even 1 or 2 more years to be as well prepared as he could be.

I'm super bummed this is over. And the ending made sense, but I wasn't a fan. But the writing is fantastic. It's been hard to stop for things like work and eating. ;-) I really like that Harry discovered witches and wizards were just the descendants of the ancients and everything he was able to do with their technology was fascinating. Overall this story has been amazing.

wait, what? that's it?

Well that's just idiotic why would he bring them to the trunk instead of a neutral place like wtf where is the strategic thinking in that

Never mind my last post, despite this story being labeled COMPLETE, on your user page you indicate that there is another chapter to be added at least.

I just hope you’re not dead.

Good story, disappointing ending

I find myself disappointed

Im a little lost on why he doesnt check his cloak for tracking charms if he knows its one of the Deathly Hollows, no one should be able to see through it if Death itself cant

The person who write fanfiction should at least know how to spell the words used in the original. Salazar Slytherin was known for parsel magic - not parcel magic. He did not work for a magic UPS and transported parcels...

As was said in other reviews this was an abrupt ending however despite that I have enjoyed your story and the way you developed Harry into a leader. Thank you for sharing your story

A fun story that doesn’t take it’s too seriously (ignoring the obvious pun). I am enjoying Harry’s adventures very much. Thank you for sharing your story

How did Harry's name come out of the Goblet of Fire when you established Harry can't enter into an agreement without the parseltongue password?