Reviews for Fine Lines
arborfg chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
your angsty fanfiction makes me want to cry greyscale rainbows.
shades of scarlet and gold chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
Well than, this fic did a fine job of writing itself.

Personally, I think you captured Romano's character and feelings toward Italy perfectly (at least, better than I ever will).



~Caramelle Anka
Sherry-Doll chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Ooh yes, up to the third sector it can be interpreted as Canada. And I'd like to hear that song, ahah - Do Better, by what artist? Angst is so much fun to write, and I understand what you mean by the fic wrote itself. And the repetitiveness was good. I loved the repetitiveness. It really added to the poignancy (God, am I really using the word poignancy?) and the whole tone of the fic, and I really liked the way both Romano and Veneziano were characterised. Your Cinderella allusion was especially good. :D
high improbability chapter 1 . 6/13/2010

I seriously freaking love this. It's so in character, and it describes Romano's inferiority complex and love for his brother so well. Wonderful job! :D

VanillaSlash chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
I always sympathize with Romano whenever Feliciano is involved. Romano can be just as sweet, trying to get people's attention, but as you said so eloquenly in this fic, Feliciano just unconsciously steals the spotlight. Brilliantly done!
0ptimuspenguin chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
So pretty, though...:'D
Anna chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
Aw, this was so adorable! I think you got the point of view down! Kudos for that 3
the mehssiah chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
*tears of joy* BEAUTIFUL~ *dies of yay* have you finally converted to itacest~? ve, i hope you have~!

anyways, spectacular, youre so frickin awesome, srsly, i wish i could write something this descriptive and beautiful~ *cries*

you win the internet, iggy, srsly~!