|Reviews for Death's Avatar|
| Shadow .X. Heart chapter 1 . 8/5
i like the fic good start but you abond it and the team sucks where are the girls?
| Kira Blade chapter 1 . 5/25
why not call it Shigan? since shi means 4 or death and since the eyes show who ever sees it their death in numerous ways why not name it death eye or something related to death?
| DoomRiderKing chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
nice. hope to see more soon.
| DragonStorm the phoenix chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
This story rocks
| Primus2021 chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
The Shikigan! Named after, 'The Shiki Fujin' Dead Demon Consuming Seal. Fujin Seal.
Shiki Death or Dead Demon Consuming. Gan Eyes. so Shikigan Death's Eyes or Dead Demon Consuming Eyes.
I like the Powers and Abilitise, I'd add a few thing however, The Eagle Vision of Assassin's Creed and the Shinigami Eyes of Death Note.
The Sword sounds like it came from Bleach, as it is a Soul Cutter aka a Zanpakutou, as such I hope it has a Shikai and Bankai.
I usually ask for NaruHina in this segment of my review, but I think even she might be put off by seeing her own death in the eyes of her crush, unless you make her immune to his power due to the Purity of her Heart and Soul, as such I think the Only real viable pairing you can use, is Naruto x Priestess Shion, as both can 'See' or cause others to 'See' the death of those that look into their eyes. Overall I'm voting for NaruHinaShion.
| Nightmare daniell61 chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
i love how you seem to come up with ideas for good storys but never continue them...
| Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
this is god damn awesome i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
This is Amazing you need to both keep it online and continue to update it!
Also I was wondering if you have thought about any love intrests for naruto?
| Noxy the Proxy chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
... only is Naruto powerful Kakashi refers to him as 'Obviously insane student." I wonder how he's gonna get along with his team.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
I like it. Its interesting and original, something most authors should strive to do more often. Good work
| Toshiro of the Eternal Dream chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
I want you to continue this story as soon as possible.
| thedeathsfavfox chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
its very good you should continue
| XxXxSnowxXxX chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
| amianime chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
i love this story and the others that are yours that i have read they are fun to read i cant wait for the next chapter
| Tsume12 chapter 1 . 7/30/2012