Reviews for Landings
Mae Equinox chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
I loved it, and it did make me laugh! I'm actually glad you made it this short too, that is what intrigued me to read it. If it had been any longer, i think you would have killed the humour of it anyway. It is perfect just as it is!
CapitainIAmNotARobot chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
Nice little story. :)
Simple Fics chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
For a 1:30 in the morning story, it's not too bad. The idea is certainly amusing. I got a little confused by your habit of pairing one character's actions or feeling in the same paragraph as another character's dialogue. Maybe try keeping a paragraph to one character? Or possibly include dialogue tags like he said, she said. On the other hand, I suppose that's not the kind of thing you think of that early in the morning, so... :P
Sintra Graham chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
Love it!
Pandagirl66 chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
this is random and pretty funny-i like good for for somethign written at 1:30 a.m.
Kamai6 chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
GREAT!

Kamai6
Matthew Samuel Cooper chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
That was incredibly odd.
TillyMe chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
This story makes you laugh " what the fuck?" haha, ramdom but funny:)
ME chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
interesting...
ablondeinaunionjack chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
That was...random...