Reviews for Services Rendered
shorty1773 chapter 5 . 6/18/2016
Hope you are able to finish this story one day! I think it is really good!
Hilary chapter 5 . 1/18/2012
WOW! This is really really good! PLEASSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEE continue updateing it!
x0x0.Tina.x0x0 chapter 5 . 12/12/2010
i seriously love this story. it is reAlly well written and i cant wait to find out what happens next
Ms. Elizabeth chapter 5 . 10/11/2010
i like this story very much!

hope you will continue with it! :)

you write very good! keep it up! :)
tigga14 chapter 5 . 7/26/2010
just started reading this story today i really like it and would love to know what happens so plz try and get back to writing :D
pattycat chapter 4 . 5/25/2010
Edward and Alice are so cute! I love their dynamic in this story. I also loved hearing EPOV. I think Bella is in trouble with those green eyes looking at her while she eats!I can't wait to see them get to know each other better and see how this story continues.

I know this is a different type story for you, but it is very good and I hope you continue. I'm telling all my friends to read and review!

Hugs, Cathy
pattycat chapter 3 . 5/25/2010
Of course, James is still a d #k!I love this coffee shop (especially the green eyed wonder behind the scenes!)! I would die from caffiene overdose because I'd stay there all the time! I might even start to like cooking...just sayin'.

Great chapter, can't wait to see how this goes on. Hugs, Cathy
pattycat chapter 2 . 5/25/2010
Bella's thoughts are so funny. I like this version of Bella. So very different than the norm. I like this Rose too. Keep up the good work! Your stories are always wonderful! Hugs, Cathy
pattycat chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
This sounds very interesting. I can't wait to see this story unfold! Love it! Hugs, Cathy
SabLuvsLogan chapter 5 . 5/24/2010
Great update, poor Kate so was it really a client or was it James that strangled her...perhaps you can't reveal that without harming the story. Can't wait for the next update :D
SabLuvsLogan chapter 4 . 5/17/2010
Guess he better get baking if thats not her favorite pie. Great update, looking forward to the next :D
SabLuvsLogan chapter 3 . 5/6/2010
Great update I sincerely hope you continue writing this fic. Looking forward to the next update. :)
chancecc chapter 2 . 5/5/2010
love it please more please
scrosby66 chapter 2 . 5/1/2010
Great story so far. I like it. Thanks for writing!
SabLuvsLogan chapter 2 . 4/30/2010
At least he was nice I guess, looking forward to the next update :D You've nabbed my attention
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