|Reviews for Proposal|
| Iczhihal chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
Bunch of typos, but I like it. It's different...
| TwilightWings18 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
are you going to write more i got to know what happen
| KChanDreams chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Your story was really interesting and I like how Black Jack made good points. Just one question: was the Ikigami in your story like an aftermath of a previous dissolved Ikigami system because the chairman said something about a mistake? That's just my question. Also are you the one who views The Moon Child and reviews? If you are, then thanks and the story has been updated. Sayanara! _
| Esplandian chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Interesting, except the next paragraph:
"I pay my taxes. I obey the laws. I report crimes, and as an added bonus; I save lives as my job. And you're telling me that I should let my daughter die for the 'good' the country." Black Jack stated.
It is BJ OoC, since he doesn't pay taxes, obey laws, or report crimes at all...