|Reviews for Kitten|
| tmi420 chapter 2 . 11/26/2015
I love how this is written; the way it flows. The lack of dialogue gives it this stream-of-consciousness feel, despite being in third person. I feel that dialogue would've have interrupted the flow. And the fact that Tweek's in a different mindset makes it really interesting. My favorite part is when he's taking forever getting down the steps, and he's afraid he'll fall, but, when he looks back, he realizes there was only three. :p
| Bianka B chapter 2 . 1/12/2014
I love how you describe Tweek under the influence of drugs. It’s like he’s totally different BUT still being himself (I don’t know if that makes sense). However I still worry, I want to believe that the drugs help him in some way- but what if not? WHAT IF HE DIES OR SOMETHING. I tell myself that craig wouldn’t make him do something TOO dangerous right? At least they are happy. Great fic! It’s different from what I usually read :)
| GabbyGrapist chapter 2 . 9/29/2010
I really like the way this is written. Its
creatively done and I prefer no dialogue.
I feel it would have just gotten in the way.
Did you intent this to just be a two-shot
or is there more to the plot that your just
waiting to put into words? lol.
About the Tranquilizers. Wouldn't they cause
Tweek to pass out? Or is the dosage so low
that he only gets 'buzzed'? I'm kinda confused.
| moonlitelm chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Haha I really like this story but...K and weed aren't legal in Canada ;; Not even TO...
I enjoy how you're writing with lack of dialogue. It's interesting, and it flows very well .o.
| rsgfhdjfkulczuy rtudiutdfgjutf chapter 2 . 5/4/2010
This is so interesting. Tweek is... not Tweek haha. I wonder what will happen when the high wears off.
| fightinIrish chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
aww lmas~. i had no idea where this was going but then when the drug ended up being ketamine i was like gaww cute cause.. that's your sn. i have no drugsense what so ever.
i am interested in seeing where this story is going!
| daverezi chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
M. Creek and Twyle. [:
Can't wait for you to update!
| rsgfhdjfkulczuy rtudiutdfgjutf chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
This is interesting. I- kind of like the idea of Cartman being a drug dealer. It's so fitting hah. Tweek trusts drug dealer Craig. 3 I thought it was really cool how you didn't have a single word of conversation, yet you conveyed the message so clearly. I'd love to see more of this.
| RedOfTheFourSword chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Nice. Very Nice.
| xxX K-Squared Xxx chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
I'm excited for this but I'm always excited for what you do so yay~ Although I'm going to see if this adheres to what you always end up doing to Creek. :
| Dead-Kenny-Dead chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
ho man, HO MAN. You gotta write more otherwise my spleen will explode