Reviews for The Advocate
Kirra kills chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
i love this idea! it's actually really plausible, and he's not the 'bad guy' most people put him as. he's more of a guardian angel, that's super awesome!
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
Wow...! This was awesome! I've wondered about something like this, too, and your execution of it was great! U Rock on!
Skylinger chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
Interesting take on the story. I have to admit if he was so busy with his own how did he find time to watch Sarah and Toby. Why would he watch her at all. He could just watch Toby. But it was a good chapter with an interesting idea. Nicely done.

notwritten chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
I have enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing Keep smiling. :-)
Lynrinth chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Very interesting. A different perspective. I hope you write more soon.