|Reviews for The heart of light|
| sapphire jewls chapter 3 . 12/20/2014
Plz update this was so amazing
| OneWay chapter 2 . 9/2/2011
Ha! I really like this "it's-my-baby thing". LOL Very funny and a very cute idea.
Go on please!
Best wishes! OneWay
| Sanura Bey chapter 2 . 4/1/2011
You're doing great! Keep it up!
| Selin74 chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
I couldn't get through this story. There were simply too many spelling and grammar mistakes. Lots of tense errors, where you would use past tense then present tense in the same sentence.
I would highly recommend more work on your English basics so they don't greatly detract from your work.
Just in your opening: enugh? It's enough
first sentence of story rally angry? really
Same paragraph, last sentence, His hart to a skip? It's heart, but the whole sentence doesn't make sense. I think you
may have meant his heart skipped a beat.
That was about as far as I got.
| WolfyMcClowd chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
Hey, this story is awesome!