Reviews for Broken People
Guest chapter 37 . 5/17/2020
This is my second time reading this fic and I still love it so much. I love the world building you’ve done and the way you write the different Na’vi but especially Jake and Tsu’tey. The writing is so vibrant and I can always picture what’s going on very precisely. Thank you for writing it so far, this is such an immersive story and I love it so much.
commanderbog chapter 34 . 4/18/2020
Neytiri should have been with Tsu'Tey.
commanderbog chapter 37 . 4/17/2020
I think Neytiri was selfish. Tsutey was good enough.
commanderbog chapter 17 . 4/17/2020
I love how tmtou writr Tsutey
commanderbog chapter 8 . 4/16/2020
I cant understand this story past chapter2.
Starling chapter 37 . 12/1/2019
Excellently written. Please update.
Noxy the Proxy chapter 37 . 7/29/2019
Oh wow. this is good. amusing, to. My Grammar is horrible, for that I apologize. xD
Copper Clouds chapter 37 . 7/2/2019
I'm really glad you wrote this. It's a great depiction of their friendship and of the potential further ramifications. I'm sorry to see that you have apparently abandoned it. If you ever pick it back up again, I'll be watching for the new chapter notice.

Thanks!
pheonix1023 chapter 37 . 2/6/2019
To start with - this is a great story with really enjoyable characterization and I just reread it because I like it so much. That said - is this officially abandoned? I assume so since its been years since an update - but there doesn't seem to be anything posted to confirm that I can see. If it is abandoned I would appreciate official notice and anything you care to share about how you were planning to finish the story.
iloveyou1234 chapter 1 . 12/30/2018
Awesome first chapter!
Guest chapter 37 . 8/19/2018
Good story please finish it.
wildtrance chapter 3 . 7/23/2018
Is Jake going to talk about his twin? Do the Na'vi have twins?
rayningnight chapter 37 . 3/26/2018
This is such a good story! I spent all night and this morning reading it :) I hope you’ll finish this one day! Thanks again.
Guest chapter 37 . 2/26/2018
I realize that you haven’t updated in a really long time so you probably don’t plan to in the near future, but I just wanted to comment that I really do enjoy your story. Whenever I come back to Avatar fandom, it’s always one I read over again and hope for more. You’ve done a great job. :)
DanicaRem chapter 37 . 1/17/2018
I've just read through your whole story and it's like nothing I've read so far. Not having a romance but rather a friendship at the center of the story is refreshing. I love your writing style and I hope that you continue this story sometime in the future. I look forward to reading more.
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