I was reading this at work, just so you know. I had to stifle my laughter at that last part. I'm probably lucky that I didn't end up snorting. It was great! Can't wait for the next update!

Very good grip on the totally different mindset the Na'Vi could have (if they were not fictional, of course).

I am soooooo tired of all that stories in which Na'Vi think and act like you and me ... or even worse, where they think and act like some cheap telenovela characters - so i am very glad of your approach.

Good writing too, very canon and in-character. And even some humour in it though the overall tone is a bit to the dark, which unfortunately fits what it should be in their situation.

Yaaay, another chapter! I did expect this outcome, after reading your other fics, but it's still amusing.

I don't remember if I've mentioned this in previous reviews, but some of Tsu'tey's dialogue doesn't always sound quite right. You do a good job keeping him in character, but the word choice doesn't always seem appropriate. Words like "considerably." It's always a challenge to give characters their own voice and not make them all talk like the author.

Jake you write very well, though. And I enjoy his Na'vi-language dialogue. :-p

LOL! I've been waiting for that forever!

With those two children yelling at each other, Norm may find his inner warrior yet! At least when it comes to reprimanding those two... Keep up the good work, dark

Lol. Obviously there is a little misunderstanding to be solved. Actually they like one another too much to fight.. I'm really curious what will happen now...

Jake. Oh Jakey-Jake. How little you understand.

Oh come on! Please don't just leave it there! As always a wonderful chapter! The problem with that is that now I'm going to have to continue with my unreasonable and childish demands for more right now! ...Please!

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They better clear up the mess. And soon by the looks of it. How does this challenge work, is it a fight until someone dies or just loses?

HAHAHAHAHAHA! Nice ending, Would They do this or Would they find a way of getting out of this? I hoping that Neather gets killed if they go through this.

Thank you very much for updating!

I like the glimpses we're getting into Na'vi culture, even just greetings and such. I think that it makes quite a bit of sense that Patak wouldn't recognize Norm in his "Sky Person" body.

"I'll just convince him and Neytiri to quit staring longingly into each other's eyes for more than thirty seconds at a stretch. I swear the two of them make me want to carry around a bucket of ice water." I lol'd at this line. XD

I like Patak testing both Norm and Jake. XD Yay for Jake reacting properly (or at least stoically)! It's quite logical that Patak thinks of "cripples" as useless like Tsu'tey once did.

"Uh, he is the leader of Horse Clan, right?" I like that Jake has to double-check, but is pretty sure he's right. XD

"A week from Tuesday? How the hell would I know?" His expression hardened abruptly. "Wait, someone's challenging you? No offense, Tsu'tey, but that's crap. You aren't in any shape for a fight." XD I love that Jake is so OBLIVIOUS about this! XD

I'm looking forward to seeing how this will be resolved! :D Clearly Jake still thinks that Tsu'tey is in charge, and Tsu'tey really seems to prefer NOT to fight Jake (not that he would be able to), so... compromise time? I look forward to the next update! Thanks again for posting this! :)

Absolutely loved Tsu-tey's throws of bitter refutation of the realities at hand. Very believable and really endeared me to him.

Oh Wow! Would Jake Chalange Tsu'tey when they both are Healthy or would they change the traditon? Or Will Tsu'tey become a conoler to Jake after the chalange?

I'm really happy to read a new chapter of this interesting and well written story. Hmm, could it possibly be, that your one-shot "One Night" solves that Olo'eyktan problem?