What happens next? I also think Tsu'tey might find some bit of influence on seeing Jake like this. Jake is in far worse shape than he is, still he never gave up. Besides there is also teh Avatar training grounds when Tsu'tey is healed to test his abilities again.

XDDD

So happy to read the new chapter. cant wait till the next update. :)

Personally...I wish this turn out to be Tsu'tey/Jake fanfic, since there arent many stories of this pairing...

Well, they are certainly warming up to each other.

Good work!

Hi!

That was good! I can't wait to see more, keep up the wonderful work and post more soon.

Cassy

Very good story. Please continue writing it. This all is a side of the Tsu-tey / Jake relationship that is cool to read.

Good story so far, but i must say that hydrogen sulfide poisoning danger is greatly overestimated. This volcanic gas won't spread too far in such humidity, so concentration should fall very quickly outside actively volcanic areas. Also, in the movie Jake clearly shows symptoms of carbon dioxide poisoning and nothing more.

Ooh!

Love this fic, btw, You write it very well and realistically, which gets big points in my book. :) Hope to read more soon!

Mirage

Love this story. So, now it's Tsu'teys turn to visit Jake. I really like the interplay between these two.

Great story.

I really like survivor fics of Trudy or Tsu'tey. Or both.

This is really well written and descripted, and the emotions and feelings are made relateable and well envisaged.

Well done.

I am looking forward to seeing how Tsu'tey reacts to seeing Neytiri and jake together. He didn't have much oppertunity to think on it because of the battle but now his mind is undestracted and fully able to comprehend and be reminded that Jake stole his betrothed mate to be. I'll be looking forward to reading how they talk him down, or if they do at all.

Keep it up! WELL DONE Rating: 10/10 (no spelling errors or grammatical errors, and story is relatively well placed.)

A good job.

Oel ngati kame.

I put your story on alert when I discovered it while taking a break during college finals and now I have a chance to review it. I love the concept you have. Since the movie didn't 'show' Tsu'tey's death I believe he could have survived also. I love the idea of him and Jake getting to know each other better. They really are more alike than they know.

I love the mix you have of action and dialog, that's a hard one for some writers to get down. Your ideas are good, your layouts believable.

I agree I think they have more to talk about and am eager to see that. Of course there has to be the conversation about Tommy-Tsu'tey is smart enough to see that there's something there. I can see them becoming good friends, companion hunters and advisers to each other over the care of the Omaticaya.

Great job and I look forward to more of this coming!

Yay for updates!~

omg this is absolutely brilliant!

Ive been scouring for fics like this for a few days since i became aware of my major obsession for avatar.. and this.. wow. its one of the best ones ive found. Its perfect!

I really hope you update soon!

UH OH! Jake got hurt I'm assuming. GREAT JOB! I hope you write more soon!

Do you mind if I sing?

upDAAAAAAAAATEEEEEEEEEdddd!

:D :D :D :D

And you've left a cliffhanger.

I have to be honest - when I saw that you'd updated, I was nervous, hoping that the next chapter wouldn't take away from the first chapter's perfection. But now I can't wait to see where this is going.

Update soon!