Reviews for Broken People |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, I like your story, please keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tsu'tey's reaction was priceless. Well, what did Jake expect. He should have known that his friend might not recognize him. I just wonder why Tsu'tey never asked why Jake had this useless legs. But maybe we'll read about it in the next chapter. So, what happened to Jake? It's plain evil to leave the chapter like this. You need to update very soon, it's an awesome story. Thank you for sharing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! Man that was good! Keep up the wonderful work and post more soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. Cassy |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok you need the next chapter and soon! I want to know if jake is all right and I like how things are developing between Tsu'tey and jake. can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() OH GOSH! poor Jake! Lets just hope he is okay... Great chapter BTW really enjoyed Tsu'tey's reaction..i think it really fight him quite nicely...Thank you for writing another chapter, and so soon! Jeeze i just read this like yesterday? and its already here! great job! ill be checking up on this story shortly :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Certinly not the warmest of welcomes on Tsu'Tey's part, but nothing that was not to be expected |
![]() ![]() ![]() FOOD! IS THAT ALL HE SAYS! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is Jake okay? Glad Tsu'tey accepted that he is Jake. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it seems Tsu'tey's getting quite used to haveing JakeSully around. :) Gonna be interesting to see how he reacts to Jake being hurt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks so much for updating. This is really well-written.I'm amazed at how you're able to create a developing friendship between these two AND you manage to keep them in character. Keep up the awesome job. I look forward to the next update. I'm REALLY anxious to see Tsu'tey's reaction to Jake's injury. PLEASE PLEASE update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, I wonder what it is the Jake got himself into? I have to hear this Titathere story! This is great! Kat |
![]() ![]() Uh oh, Jake having a run in with any of Pandora's giant animals isn't good. Why not have Tsu'tey be told how Jake got put in a wheelchair? That is one thing Tsu'tey might find of interest is Jake, despite his injury, won't quit, even in his current situation. Look what he did already as a Dreamwalker, and it shows Jake doesn't give up and won't. Also why doesn't he tell more on what happenned when he wasn't in his avatar? such as Quaritch knocking him out, and it was Quaritch and Selfridge who killed the first Hometree. |
![]() ![]() Aw how could you end the chapter like that. i really like this story so far please update when ever you can Dragon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad that the new chap is up and all, but WHAT IDIOTIC MANEUVER WAS JAKE EVEN TRYING TO DO WHILE PISSING OFF A TITANOTHERE IN A WHEELCHAIR? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! You updated! That's awesome. :D I'm glad to see this story is still interesting you. Please keep it up! Mirage |