Reviews for When Innocence is Gone
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
Please continue the story,you hook me up with this story BIG TIME! I hope I wouldn't offend anyone on what I'm about to asks...could you put in a bit of...lemon...?in Konzen x Goku part...? please don't kill me for this '''
Saita the Kirin chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Could use a little more of a set up, maybe a chapter on gokus reaction or with the guy saying his evil plan *shrugs*
kinosternon chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
This is a really interesting start for a story, I'd love to see where it goes from here! The idea of poor little Goku used as a weapon is really sad, but it's a great twist...
snowangel66 chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
nice story idea, cant wait for the next chapter
iwanteddeletethis764 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
It sounds good so far, you get an e-cookie from me! ;)
Optomistic Emo Kleptomaniac chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
pinball62 chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
hey im liking the story so far so please update soon :)
sango92 chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
So far in this first chapter I must admit I like it. Taking a twist to the Saiyuki's gaiden is pretty cool. I can't wait to read more!