Reviews for Too Long In The Sun
Cathywren chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Aw, this was so sweet.. Love the way you wrote their relationship, it was definitely believable and cute - poor Merlin!
islanzadi heap chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
This was just perfect!
EmotionalDreamer101 chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
That was really good, I love this XD that was so cute!
Raevi chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
I just love this story! It really cute towards the end with Arthur and merlin! Nice job
dragoness simplicity chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Lol. Good story. Great ending XD

A few spelling mistakes here and there, but still good _
Shadow Cat17 chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
I really enjoyed this story!
Yuki082 chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Lovely. Really I quite enjoyed it. Please keep writing Merlin fics!

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~Yuki
Just Celia chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
That was really good! Of course, it was horrible for Merlin, but the h/c made it better... and I liked Uther, and the bit of humour at the end :D
merlinfan chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
I wish there had been a slash warning. It was there, and as a nonslash reader, I felt tricked into reading this story. For me, it made the whole story unbelievable. Please take this as a construtive criticism. Label your stories so the reader will know what he or she is getting. Good writing skills, though. Very descriptive.
Coalxamongxdiamond chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Awww Sweetie I loved it!

It is cute and fluffy! (in a good way)

But you should make shure you mark your slah or youll get some ugly reply. Dam homophobes! But non the less lovely story !
merlinfan93 chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
Awww...poor Merlin! This story was really sweet, though XD
cba-to-sign-in chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
You need to label this as slash.
Mel1592 chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
nice work :)
Scare4irony chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Such a long story...but so unbelievably WORTH it!

That was freaking brilliant! Though I would've like to see Gregory get a harsher punishment - no one hurts Arthur's Merlin!

Scare4irony
Iniga chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Just what I needed to read during a heatwave. :)

Nicely done.
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