Reviews for Before Brother Bear
Annabelle E chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Then made the story of Kenai's life of when he is a bear and when he gets married and then what you think what happens in brother bear 3 which is coming in July 18 2014
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
it was so bueatiful
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
proofread this thing. you're older now that all the mistakes in spelling, grammar and punctuation will probably stand out a little more so you should fix this up a bit.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
The mother bent down and Rubbed his Head genitally and smiling.

uh... genitally? genitals are things like the penis and junk...
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
maybe you should put an actual summary instead a 'please read my story'

it was good either way
AnthonyAngrywolf chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
I wish there were more brother bear fanfics!
Xion the Author chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Why have I not read this story? It's really great! The plot is amazing, I really like your idea. But the only thing confusing would have to be the confusing paragraph form and sentencing.

It would've been better if you separated each dialogue from the different characters into different paragraphs and fixed the punctuation but still nonetheless LOVE it and glad to have it as a wonderful addition to the fandom.

~Been Here Before~

Xion the Author
majobloem chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Like the story, its kinda touchy. :-)
CreepyFan chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Very nice story. Well done, but it was a little hard to read. Other than that, I loved reading it:)
anime-rocks-08 chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
this is good, right another one. However you have to leave spaces coz it very hard to read x