Thank you taking time out of your life to write this Harry Potter tale. This was a great story. I wasn't sure how you were going to put this together. I've seen other stories like this one, but the way you mixed the action and love story together was great! Again, thank you for a great story.

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HellsRanger59

You know I like some of your work especially "chosen ones" and a "new order", those are truly fantastic work and another one I forget the name of however this one is a complete disappointment I'm not going to lie. The moronic over the top Racism and bigotry that you have the British ministry of magic depicted is kind of stupid and nit well thought out. My first issue is Shacklebolt talking about sacrifice and Harry is for the good of all wizard kind, you do know that the magical world extends across the entire planet, voldemort is of no threat to anyone except magical Britain right now, that is the reason why none of the other magical countries in Europe even interfered in the nonsense going on in Britain. Because it's only a Britain problem at the moment, Otherwise even the ICW would have stepped in to deal with the issue. And the only reason Voldemort is such a huge problem in the first place is by playing the pure blood supremacy which is strictly a British belief that originated from Salazar Slytherin (And even then his beliefs about muggleborns being a threat because Who would they choose to side with their muggle parents or their fellow witches and wizards is not the same as the current pure blood supremacist which is based mostly on a superiority to complex), However the majority of the magical world does not share that pure blood supremacy belief system I mean do they all hate muggles as a whole? yeah they do. And honestly rightly so after all muggles did try to Start a genocide war against them and also try to enslave them so they're justifiably p***** and the statue of secrecy is nothing but the longest seize fire in history anyway.

While the ministry is pretty bigoted we can all agree on that at you're taking it a bit far I highly doubt that the ministry would ever be able to do what they're doing to mutants in your story for the simple fact that we already put them much have an example of how they would actually treat withered Newton hybrids in the actual book. Metamorphmagus and parcelmouths and other witches and wizards with unique abilities could already be considered mutants, among wizards and witches.

This whole cliche nonsense where the magical world is portrayed as the epitome of bigotry and racism as if the muggle world isn't even worse it's kind of pretty ridiculous it goes against everything J.K.R Establish about what wizard kind represents they are abnormal as hell many of them have strange quotes and abilities and generally minded their own business. Mutants among which is unwithered would not bring that much attention I mean even in the books in order for someone like Dolores umbridge to pass the ridiculous racist and bigoted the laws that she did she literally had to play on the fears of the population to get any chance of passing them and those fears were helped along for instance the laws against werewolves if not for a federal greyback's actions those balls would NeVER have been passed in the first place. Honestly officially the most racist law that we know of that the ministry ever passed was just a law to make sure that ones were only used by witches and wizards that's about as far as it went as I said the most racist laws I know of is the laws against werewolves.

And an action like this doesn't even make sense for the British ministry to pass in the first place because considering how in magical Britain pretty much every which and wizard are interrelated and for the pure blood that's even more of the case. And I'm pretty sure that all of the pure blood families should have dormant mutant genes in their family bloodline and they should be well aware of that. So it makes no sense that they would ever engage in an action like this that could negatively affect them in the first place. I mean look at all of the pure blood supremacists that we were introduced to in the books, that hated muggleborns and We're a part of the governing body of the ministry of magic and yet we know for a fact that not a single law that discriminated against the muggleborns was ever passed. And the only time that fact changed was after voldemort took over the ministry of magic, yet you expect me to believe that the minister of magic would actually engage in these actions against wizard/mutants hybrids when they didn't even do that against the muggleborns until after voldemort took over the ministry of magic?

So yeah compared to your other works this one is really dumb, The idea of a Harry Potter X men crossover is a great 1 however the way this is turning out so far is extremely ludicrous.

Absolutely loved the story, a good ending too. Though I hope that someday there will be a sequel.

Loved the 'multi' crossover. Ending in a zombie eater world.

Incredible story ! Thanks for the moment you made me live !

Captain Britain is obviously ignorant to what is happening to the mutants of Britain itself. He is also a failure if he isn't going after Voldemort and his DE's who go around killing non-magical British citizens.

I had downloaded this story to read on my ebook and couldn't put it down. It has been a fantastic read. Thank you very much.

I hope you don't try and play Snape as a good guy who was played by Dumbledore when you consider that he was a Death Eater before that happened. If you think about it that way, the only "good" thing that Snape ever did of his own free will was going to Dumbledore to try and save Lily. Everything else was just him being used by Dumbledore.

Great Story! Thank you for sharing your talent!

If Harry is super strong and super fast how are wizards coming out of a floo one by one something he needs to flee from rather than an opportunity to finish some off?!

This is a good story so far but the code names bug me a bit. It's not like Harry's crew need secret identities or anything.

Thanks for a great (re)read.

This is a really good story, I hope you make part 2 to thisit's amazing complete story and I love the interactions that are going on here.

Y'know, thinking back to that Dumbledore/Fletcher scene I really thought you put him on backburner because Dumbydoor did the same Horcrux ritual with Fletcher as with his clone.
And that you'd gone the way of Dumbledore-is-the-Dark-Wizard-Harry-needs-to-defeat.
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There is always the 'Dark Lord' but never 'Tom Riddle', nor 'Voldemort'.

Ooooh, a Lord of the Rings Easter Egg. Always appreciated.