Reviews for With You
wandamarie chapter 1 . 5/4
thank you
krnegi91 chapter 7 . 4/4
This story was pretty cute...
Qtsarahanne chapter 7 . 1/29
Cute story thanks for writing it.
wandamarie chapter 7 . 1/22
I loved the story thank you
wandamarie chapter 6 . 1/22
I am enjoying the story
wandamarie chapter 5 . 1/22
thanks for the chapter keep up the great work
wandamarie chapter 4 . 1/22
thank you
wandamarie chapter 3 . 1/22
keep up the good work
wandamarie chapter 2 . 1/22
oh my poor Harry
wandamarie chapter 1 . 1/21
thanks for the chapter
Calmzone1 chapter 7 . 1/4
I enjoyed it. I found some of your action transitions within the chapters were a little too quick, or sparse, but I can see that you were wanting to move the story along. But if this were an original story, you have to remember that there are some assumptions that can get away without explanations, but others require elaborating. After all, not everyone might know how wizards dress in robes, and what types of robes they wear, and how their clothes differ from muggles, etc. One thing I don’t remember reading is if Lucius bought Harry a new wardrobe because him seeing Dudley’s leftovers or Harry coming to dinner in his school clothes would definitely have opened the can of worms labeled Dursley much quicker. ;)
KAW2015HPLOVER chapter 7 . 12/14/2017
AWESOME story !
Thank you, I’m heading back to your writing for more.
Your fan
lilikaco chapter 7 . 12/11/2017
Omg! I thought it was abandoned but it's finished yay! Thank you so much for sharing with us :)
lilikaco chapter 6 . 12/11/2017
Omg I had forgotten AGAIN that this seems to be abandoned lol
Oh well one more chapter at least :)
lilikaco chapter 5 . 12/5/2017
Lol I love Harry with pregnancy cravings
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