Reviews for With You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely! Thank you for writing! |
![]() ![]() Awesome story well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! So glad I found this cute story3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story, it's very well written thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how it's going but perhaps you should use more commas, it will make the reading easier. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed the story. And I’m glad my worries stated in my last review were unfounded. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This comment is for the Lucius v. Umbitch scene, which I just finishedI haven’t read the rest of the chapter as of yet. I feel as if that phrase that was used might come back and bite Harry in the bum, considering Granger and Weasel know that that’s what’s on Harry’s hand. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had to read this story twice it was so artfully and beautifully written. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do I get it right? Because the muggleborns after finishing school are going back to the nomal world...there is now a law that all of them must marry a pureblood (HUSBAND...not partner it must be a male one) otherwise the muggleborns must leave...what they would do anyway. With such a law EVERY muggleborn and halveblood would flee in the next second! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So to combat muggles borns returning to the muggle world, you're telling them they have to marry a pureblood or go back to the muggle world? but if that's what they usually do anyway ... what exactly does this law accomplish? |
![]() ![]() Good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() HE PREGGERSSSSSSS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Que história bonitinha. Eu realmente gosto do par, mas eu esperava um pouco mais de rastejar por parte dos Malfoy e do Snape, por conta do mal entendido entre Harry e Lucius. Harry perdoa muito fácil, e Lucius não é de rastejar. Ok. Mas Draco e Snape deviam ter sofrido um pouco mais, ainda mais o Snape. Amei a história. Parabéns. |
![]() ![]() Awww |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry but I figured it would be longer and more interesting to read. So that we would see Harry Potter have his other mate Severus be with him! |