Reviews for Separate Paths, United Fates
alicia chapter 7 . 6/14/2002
that's amazing please keep going!
Apollo Creed chapter 7 . 2/18/2002
Man ...7 chapters and no ones reviewed it yet?

that sucks..i suggest you put "yaoi" in front of your summary then lotsa of people will read it..oh and what i didnt like was the action/adventure/humor thing cause i guess people dont take that seriously when they see that so they wont bother readin it. oh and the actual story its self was..boring because i dont really like original characters.