Reviews for His Prize
ladyg228 chapter 1 . 7/5/2017
This was such a cute story! loved reading every second of it. My favorite part was veggie reflecting on his prize )
Amazing girl 55 chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
I truly think you cut it off I want more you should continue to write this
Dino-Rogue chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
'Capsule Queen'? I like that name for Bulma! It made me grin...

"Here, he had the most beautiful, the most intelligent, the richest and most successful woman sort after on the face of planet…" Before the word 'planet', a 'the' is probably in order, and "Sort after"? Hahaha! You mean, 'sought' after, right? :) And "his presence know"? You should change that to 'known' to correct the spelling.

Aww, yay! Go, Vegeta! This is exactly why Bulma loves you. You llove true, too! But you don't just talk the talk, you walk the walk from the heart, and that's better than any other man could say for themselves... appreciation just doesn't seem to be in their vocabulary nowadays. :)

Sweet, cute, funny, tender little one shot... I love this piece!
sakurenjiDREamer chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
Oh! Can you continue this please? :D Like what happened after that? What were the reactions of the people there?

You should know that because not only the idea here is interesting that I'm requesting for a sequel but that it's also well written.
JaspheReal chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Vegeta Bulma
Hieiko chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
I think the ending works quite well. :)
cara9001 chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
lol no one takes Vegeta's lady!
ImagingThings chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Yeah. That oughta show that Matsura. You DON'T mess with Vegeta's wife (even if they aren't married)

Nice story.
Musette Fujiwara chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
yes vegeta has his prize...
crazysmile15 chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
deleteaccplz chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
Late review!

I like this story; simple, cute and even kind of realistic. I think Mr. Matsura is very lucky he just got "send down the floor". :)

bbissocute chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Adorable. I love it when Veggie gets himself jealous. Great job.
Queen Elenya Hawk chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
There are too many Mr. Matsuras and barely any Vegetas in this world, ain't that unfair? u.u Anyway, loved it )
omnipotent Porunga-once again chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
a jealous Vegeta a cute Vegeta.
omnipotent Porunga chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
i could visualise the whole thing as i read it...
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