Reviews for Red Devil
DreamQuill chapter 12 . 1/29/2011
I'm finally catching up. I knew Jane was lying but it's tough for any wife or girlfriend to go through that. Bella is not over what Jacob did. She can't really move on and be happy with Soccerward until she makes peace and forgives.

Edward is scared and slightly insane, judging from the conversations he has with his cock. This is the first time he's been in love and he's afraid to get hurt too.

Great chapter. Oh, and Edward's dad is a ginger. LMAO.
elaine67 chapter 13 . 1/28/2011
Great to see an update , can Bella spell awkward.
team rob chapter 13 . 1/28/2011
team rob chapter 9 . 1/28/2011

found this as a fav of an author whose stories i love...

love the sports side of this too
ADRIANA'87 chapter 13 . 1/28/2011


my girl are back!

*jumps at you*

*kisses you all over*

I have no words... THANK YOU FOR COMING BACK!

chapter was amazing,as always!

it's soo nice to see our Footballward back with us!

and that little Dru-Travis thing...


Dru's voice... see what're you doing.. disctricting me! LoL

anyway, thank you update!

can't wait to see Edward's reaction! *giggles*

readingmama chapter 13 . 1/28/2011
Lmao. Pet, you wrote your gay porn addiction in.

So glad to see these two back! Can't wait to see Edwards response to the video
ChocolateLover82 chapter 13 . 1/28/2011
Yay, you're back! Glad to have you bacj, bbs. :-)

Oh boy, Edward sure has issues, none will be resolve if he doesn't talk about them to someone. You gotta have the patience of a saint to deal with his ass, LOL.

And what an ending, LOL.

Can't wait to read more and see how he'll handle that and if he's open up to Bella.

Love, CL82
Aldi74 chapter 9 . 1/28/2011
Holly fucking hell!
Aldi74 chapter 8 . 1/28/2011
"I shrugged. Fucker can have at it. That bastard will die a fucking death before he takes what's mineā€¦ours, I quickly correct when my dick quirks one of his pubic eyebrows." - LMFAO!
Aldi74 chapter 7 . 1/28/2011
"I immerse myself in computer games and even have a couple of beers on the sly. That will teach the cow to slap me." - oh yeah Eddie, that will for sure teach her! hehe

Gosh I love jealous and possessive Edward!
FFpassion chapter 13 . 1/28/2011
yay it's so good to have you back )thank you for the update!

wow What a torrid relationship Edward has with his old man, it was sad to see them both yelling at each other and Edward senior not acknowledging his sons passion for football as being important. Only the business is important in his eyes. I hope they can one day mend their relationship.

I love Edward and his peen :)

It's going to be interesting to see Bella explaining what she was watching to Edward, can't wait to hear what his peen will have to say hahaha

looking forward to reading more, thank you.



Aldi74 chapter 6 . 1/28/2011
"My dick agreed of course and started drawing up his own BB centric menu. Amazing." - hehe I love his dick!

"The Swan was about to need a new pair of panties from watching me play." - he's not conceited at all ;-D little mofo!
Aldi74 chapter 5 . 1/28/2011
That f*cking dog! Doesn't he get a hint? Stupid Jake!
Aldi74 chapter 4 . 1/28/2011
Black - The Devil In The Flesh - hahaha!
Aldi74 chapter 3 . 1/28/2011
"I internally threaten my dick with nothing but hand jobs for a month if he doesn't pull his shit together but he simply turns his back and gives the finger mumbling something about red being all wrong. He wants brown." - bwahahahaha! I love your story!
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