Reviews for Red Devil
sharkbellywhite chapter 4 . 7/10/2011
Oh my! Black did a number on Bella! I'm hoping Bella holds out for a while and remains professional...I think the tension is needed to keep Edward on track so to speak. Really enjoying this story!
sharkbellywhite chapter 3 . 7/10/2011
Well played Bella...I truly hope she hired the tattoo artists! Brills! I for one don't know if I would want to take a trip with the "wanker" for one, but should make for some interesting reading!
sharkbellywhite chapter 2 . 7/10/2011
I'm already enjoying the character attributes! Can't wait to see Agentella bring on the ice queen! Enjoying this story very much so far!
sharkbellywhite chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Whoa...firstly...your name is hysterical...I would read anything you wrote just because of it! Can't believe I haven't come across it sooner! oh my! I read the brief description of the story and thought...yeah...I could go for some Soccerward on a hot, lazy Sunday. Wasn't expecting that. I'm hooked! Can't wait to read more!
gitgit chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
shit son

they are going to have one hell of a meeting! or should i say boot camp!
gitgit chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
i freakin love this chapter

cant wait to see what you have planned for next!
gitgit chapter 1 . 6/14/2011

which twisted cunt are we talking about?

that was definitely an interesting chapter though! !
SadieStarr chapter 15 . 5/29/2011
Manchester United and Twi-Fic - two of my favourite things together!

Please update soon.
allthatsparkles chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Okay, got to find out why Edward is playing in a game while Bella is off somewhere possibly dead.
Tyalieva chapter 15 . 4/22/2011
Ouch Ouch Ouch!

Is there hope to read an update someday? I can see it's been 2 months sinces the last one. :-(

I kind of started (well, lets admit it, not really started but...) to like those lemons a lot!

Hope to read more soon!
Mireads chapter 15 . 4/15/2011
This is reallyba great story
miss.eve chapter 15 . 3/15/2011
i love this story!

sorry for skipping and do not leaving any comments earlier but this NEXT button was too tempting! Once i start to read i cannot help myself and read it all!

I really like Bella in this story (i know she is little messed up-black's,mummy's and daddy's issues etc.) In fact she is a badass! Little insecure when it's comes to feelings but he manage her job like a pro! She is smart,witty and do not takes any bullshit!

Edward... let's just said that i cant write much without taking the shower - the cold one!

And last but not leat THE penis of course! The real main character in this story! Damned if he doesn't deserve some kind of Penis Award! I love edward's mental exchanges with him! I am contantly grinning like a moron in front of my computer screen!

waiting for the new chapter! great great story!
Daphnetjuh chapter 15 . 3/9/2011
Noooooo! why. why leave us hanging at this point? and why did I again manage to find a story to read that needs new upates after a cliffy? I'm doomed..

Anyways I love your story. Keep up the good work! the both of you!
Angeldolphin01 chapter 15 . 3/5/2011
I just finished reading the story as it stands and I love it. I can't wait to read what happens next.
luckystar113 chapter 15 . 3/5/2011
Ah come on! You guys are so evil!

On one hand, I understand why Edward is so upset but at the same time, where is the trust? I said it before, he needs to open up and trust her. They're clearly dancing around the issues at hand and having to keep everything secret isn't helping.

It was obvious that things were going to blow up at some point. And now I have to wait for it! Teases :)

I think it was good for Bella to have someone who knows her come out to see her. Especially to tell her everything she knows but won't admit.

Edward needs to get over himself. I'm glad that they're finally going to get to talk things out but at the same time, I'm worried. I know how his temper will get the best of him and it scares me that he will just walk away without the benefit of the doubt. But he wouldn't do that to his dick would he?

Bella is one lucky girl btw. And I am not jealous at all. Nope.
603 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 7 14 .. Last Next »